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Postby Squigsquasher » Fri Jul 26, 2013 4:28 pm

Well, I have now published the first chapter of my new fanfiction; Some Do Not Like It Hot.

The basic plot: Against all logic, good taste and common sense, an Angel attack results in the pilots being genderswapped. As you can imagine, they are not amused. Will Shinji master the art of walking in a skirt? Will Asuka's misandric tendencies come back to bite her (or rather, him) in the arse? Will Rei become even more perverted than normal? And why oh why did Ritsuko decide it was a good idea to mix Kool-Aid with the LCL?

This is an in-progress fic. More chapters will be posted as time goes on.

Click here to read it for yourself.

Enjoy! Please leave a review if possible!
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Postby amitakartok » Fri Jul 26, 2013 5:54 pm

Do you have a beta reader?
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Postby Squigsquasher » Sat Jul 27, 2013 1:13 pm

View Original Postamitakartok wrote:Do you have a beta reader?


Nope. All done myself. I'm still getting used to FanFiction.net's stupid format system (Why can't I just hit return to insert a damn break for crying out loud!?!?) but I thoroughly checked it for spelling errors or formatting mistakes.
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Postby Atropos » Sat Jul 27, 2013 1:15 pm

View Original Postamitakartok wrote:Do you have a beta reader?

Effin' OUCH, man. You can't say something like that and not elaborate.

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Postby amitakartok » Sat Jul 27, 2013 1:37 pm

No offense was intended, I asked to determine whether he wants one so that I can volunteer if needed.
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Postby NemZ » Sat Jul 27, 2013 1:47 pm

That sort of thing would be what the networking sticky is meant for.
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Postby Squigsquasher » Sat Jul 27, 2013 1:51 pm

View Original Postamitakartok wrote:No offense was intended, I asked to determine whether he wants one so that I can volunteer if needed.


None taken. :asuka_thumbsup:

I might take you up on the offer. I was thinking of getting Nuke-kun to help, but hey, the more the merrier!
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Postby Atropos » Sat Jul 27, 2013 1:51 pm

^ ...does Nuke write fanfic?

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Postby Squigsquasher » Fri Aug 02, 2013 8:00 am

Aye. He's beta reading for me now.

Anyway, the next chapter is in the works, albeit quite slowly. Stay tuned for more!
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Postby Nuclear Lunchbox » Sun Aug 11, 2013 12:28 pm

View Original PostAtropos wrote:^ ...does Nuke write fanfic?

Nuke does indeed write fanfic, and is working on stuff as we speak.

Also, chapter two of Squigs's fic is up on ff.net. Go forth and read.

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Postby Squigsquasher » Sun Aug 11, 2013 2:07 pm

Indeed, chapter 2 is now up. Here's a more direct link:

It's all going pete tong...
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Postby MAGI_01 » Thu Aug 15, 2013 2:27 pm

I have enjoyed the first couple of chapters. Keep up the good work!
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Postby amitakartok » Mon Aug 19, 2013 6:52 am

What happened to Rei? Did she get genderflipped too?
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Postby Squigsquasher » Mon Aug 19, 2013 12:48 pm

View Original Postamitakartok wrote:What happened to Rei? Did she get genderflipped too?
Just wait and see. I'll probably be posting chapter 4 soon.
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Postby Squigsquasher » Fri Aug 23, 2013 11:23 am

Chapter 4 is up. Well, it's been up for a while but I forgot to mention it. Derp.
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Postby NemZ » Fri Aug 23, 2013 3:02 pm

I honestly can't tell if this is great or retarded. :|
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Postby Squigsquasher » Fri Aug 23, 2013 3:09 pm

Oh.

OK.

I'm...hurt.
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Postby NemZ » Fri Aug 23, 2013 4:28 pm

I haven't come to a conclusion yet. It depends on how I interpret that 'parody' tag at any given moment.

Rei being "eh, whatever" about it was amusing though.
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Postby Squigsquasher » Fri Aug 23, 2013 4:36 pm

View Original PostNemZ wrote:I haven't come to a conclusion yet. It depends on how I interpret that 'parody' tag at any given moment.

Rei being "eh, whatever" about it was amusing though.


Ah, I see. Let me make something very clear about this fic.

It is not, in any way, shape or form, meant to be taken seriously. This is not an artistic, sociological statement about transgender issues, gender roles or psychology. It is an opportunity for ridiculous humour interspersed with WAFF.

It is meant to be very silly-not quite CYOA levels of non-stop silly, but still silly. It is definitely firmly within the realms of parody though. Hence why we have Ritsuko mixing Kool-Aid with the LCL, Asuka declaring that she is the mission leader, in her words, "BECAUSE I'M IN THE RED ONE!" and Rei talking to herself about cheese.

It's set in the middle of the "Action Arc" when the show was relatively light-hearted and silly, and will hopefully be almost entirely angst-free.
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