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Postby amitakartok » Thu Mar 24, 2016 7:36 pm

Chapter 26 up now.

Kaworu has a foreboding dream in the middle of lots of cryptic foreshadowing.
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Postby amitakartok » Tue Apr 12, 2016 9:06 pm

Chapter 27 up.

If anyone thought Asuka was going to live without Eva this time... you thought wrong. :asuka_thumbsup:
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Postby amitakartok » Sat Jun 25, 2016 5:50 pm

Huh, forgot to update this one. Chapter 28 up and the story got bumped up to the top of FF.net's Eva section, so it should be easier to find now.

Nothing very important in this chapter, just Rei having fun.
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Postby amitakartok » Sun Aug 07, 2016 7:26 pm

Public Service Announcement: this story is now available in alternatehistory.com's ASB section.
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Postby amitakartok » Thu Aug 11, 2016 9:30 pm

Chapter 29 up.

Asuka's officially on the team now.
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Postby Fyrstorm » Mon Sep 12, 2016 3:31 am

Apologies if this comes out of nowhere (though I have posted some on another of your threads for this fic on a different forum, so, whatever). I really like what you've done with this story. It's not exactly something I can verbalize properly, but... it is quite good, and I very much enjoy it for all the work it seems you've put in. Sorry for not being able to offer much else in the way of critique, tough I will say...
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Yeah, the "Rei is Kaworu's sister" did feel like a teeny little bit of an asspull-- but it was a well-executed asspull with a valid reason behind it, so I'll forgive you on it.

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Postby amitakartok » Wed Sep 21, 2016 6:55 pm

Chapter 30 up.

Asuka makes a rather loud statement of opinion about a negative comparison between her breast size and Mari's.
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Postby amitakartok » Mon Oct 31, 2016 10:20 pm

Chapter 31 up.

Asuka bitches about something, as usual - except this time, she's got a point.
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Postby amitakartok » Mon Feb 27, 2017 5:53 pm

Chapter 32 up.

In which Asuka does stupid teenage shit and makes Kaworu sweat in the process.
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Mana, Mayumi and Sakura: the TRUE goddesses of Eva


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