Translation of Evangelion: 3.0

[akoss]

Translation project is at:
https://github.com/eva3/Evangelion--3.0-Translation


LIST OF THINGS TO DO

— Create a .ass file from the translation (this implies timing in the h:mm:ss.cc format).
— Translate the missing lines.
— Proof-read everything to find translation mistakes.
— Proof-read everything to find spelling/grammar mistakes.

P.S.: the entire movie with an old version of our translation can be found on nyaa. Search for "Qamrip"

[Reichu]

I can translate certain kinds of dialogue well enough, but my listening comprehension isn't the best. Anyone aware of a place that's transcribing the dialogue? The livedoor Wiki we used for 2.0 seems to be a pretty dead place now, unfortunately.

[Kaname Langley]

4-chan Asuka´s last line

>Asuka: 'Kid Shinji. You didn't come save me. In the end, you only thought about yourself again...'
>Asuka: 'I thought you had stopped being silent... You're still crying. No matter how many years go by, you're still a brat as usual. Here, take this. COME ON! You should at least be able to STAND on your own!'
>Mari tells Shinji to save Asuka, but he flakes out, so Mari has to save her instead and ends up stuck in the fallout.
>Which is why the 08 is wrecked when it was basically just in a stalemate fight against 09, when Asuka blew up 02 to try and stop 13.
>Mari could have gotten out if Shinji had done something to help Asuka.
>But he didn't.

[esselfortium]

Oh jeez, is that really suggesting that Mari dies?

[Xard]

I doubt that esp. if she's present in the kid photo Fuytsuki shows.


Good to see Asuka's being Asuka giving Shinji the hell he deserves

[esselfortium]

I doubt that esp. if she's present in the kid photo Fuytsuki shows.

Well, she's not in the desert scene, which even Q!Rei tags along for...

[bobbyfischer's ghost]

That's some vintage Asuka.

[Xard]

Well, she's not in the desert scene, which even Q!Rei tags along for...

Neither is Misato's crew (or her) and they were at the same location when shit went down

I wouldn't worry about Mari too much. If someone ends up being downright unkillable it'll be her

[esselfortium]

Neither is Misato's crew (or her) and they were at the same location when shit went down

I wouldn't worry about Mari too much. If someone ends up being downright unkillable it'll be her

Well that's weird. What the hell are Asuka and company doing trekking across the desert on foot then? Unless Misato and her crew died as well, though I'd imagine we would have heard all about that

[Reichu]

Just did some checking, and Mari gets out (means unclear) after force ejecting Shinji's plug from Eva-13. So she's fine.

Can we keep thread on topic?

[Azathoth]

Well that's weird. What the hell are Asuka and company doing trekking across the desert on foot then? Unless Misato and her crew died as well, though I'd imagine we would have heard all about that

i'm assuming Asuka's "we have go somewhere the Lilim can find us" is in reference to Misato et al. in other words they have to wander around until they find Wunder.

[Grub]

Can someone translate Kaworu's last lines for me? My utterly terrible Japanese is interpreting, "Don't look like that. I will wait for you, Shinji" which I know must be wrong.

[akoss]

I can translate certain kinds of dialogue well enough, but my listening comprehension isn't the best. Anyone aware of a place that's transcribing the dialogue? The livedoor Wiki we used for 2.0 seems to be a pretty dead place now, unfortunately.

Apparently, there is no one transcribing the audio this time.
At least not yet.

4-chan Asuka´s last line

Could you please post when that line starts?

Thank you

[LiLi]

"Don't look like that. I will wait for you, Shinji" which I know must be wrong.

I would go with,
"Don't make that face, we can meet again."

:)

[akoss]

Here is what we have so far:

00:45 - 07:42 (Translated)
07:42 - 40:09 (Transcripted and timed)
~41:00 - ~50:00(?) (Translated)
??:?? - ??:?? - (Kaname Langley's piece of translation, timing needed to be added).


If you have good listening comprehension, you can translate from ~50:00 onwards, based on the audio.
If you have good reading comprehension, you can translate the Japanese transcripted text.

If you have a Github account, just tell me and I will add you as a collaborator to the repository (you will be able to edit the file freely).

To keep track on progress, check: https://github.com/eva3/Evangelion--3.0-Translation/blob/master/TRANSLATION

Godspeed!

[Reichu]

I don't have a github account (honestly never heard of it until now), but meantime I'll paste whatever I accomplish in here.

Here's Kaworu telling Shinji about Third Impact. Please respond only with translation-related issues, and take other thoughts that might come to mind to the relevant discussion threads. If I have to do more split-merges, I'll be very unhappy.

（50:22)
K: In a moment the clouds will break, and you'll see the truth you've desired.
S: What is this...?
K: The outcome of Third Impact, which happened while you were merged with Eva-01.
S: This is... What happened to everyone in the city?
K: Mass extinction is not unusual on this planet.
Rather, it is the facet [?] that drives evolution.
Because life is fundamentally something that adjusts to the world and changes itself.
However, Lilin change not themselves, but the world.
So they brought the rite of artificial evolution onto themselves.
Old life is offered in sacrifice, so that new life blessed with the Fruit of Life may be created.
It is all death behavior [?] that has been programmed since ancient times.
Nerv call it the Human Instrumentality Project.
(51:38)
S: This is Nerv's-- what my father was doing.
K: Ikari Shinji-kun, once awakened, Eva-01 became the trigger for Third Impact and opened the Door of Guf. Lilin call it Near Third Impact. It was all initiated by you.
S: You're wrong! All I did was save Ayanami!
K: True, but that was the cause...
S: All this... I didn't know. You're telling me it all so fast, and there's nothing I can do about it!
K: Indeed. There's nothing you can do about your past.
The truth you desired to know.
The Lilin are providing you reparation for your sin as a result.
That's what your neck device is, no?
S: What sin? I didn't do anything. I had nothing to do with it!
(52:50)
K: If it wasn't you, then it was someone else? [?]
However, there's no sin that can't be redeemed.
There is always hope. Always.

Original text (scraped together via primitive listening comprehension and Google)

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(50:22)
カヲル：もうすぐ雲が切れる、君の知りたかった真実がみえるよ
シンジ：なんだこれ…
カヲル：君が初号機と同化している間に起こったサードインパクトの結果だよ
シンジ：これじゃ…、町のみんなは？
カヲル： この星での大量絶滅は珍しい事じゃない。
むしろ、進化を促す面もある。
生命とは本来、世界に合わせて自らを変えていく存在だからね。
しかし、リリンは自らではなく世界の方を変えていく。
だから、自らを人工的に進化させる為の儀式を起こした。
古の生命体を贄とし、生命の実を与えた新たな生命体を作り出す為にね。
全ては太古よりプログラムされていた絶命行動だ。
ネルフでは人類補完計画と呼んでいたよ。
(51:38)
シンジ：ネルフがこれを…父さんは、何をやっているん
カヲル：碇シンジ君、一度覚醒し、ガフの扉を開いたエヴァ初号機はサードインパクトのトリガーとなってしまった。
リリンの言うニア・サードインパクト。
全てのきっかけは、君なんだよ。
シンジ：違う、僕はただ、綾波を助けたかっただけだ。
カヲル：そうだね、しかしそれが原因で…
シンジ：そんな…、僕は知らないよ、そんな事急に言われたってどうしようもないよ！
カヲル：そう。
どうしようもない、君の過去。
君の知りたかった真実だ。
結果としてリリンは罪の代償を与えた。
それがその首のモノじゃないのかい？
シンジ：罪だなんて…何もしてない、ぼくは関係ないよ！
(52:50)
カヲル：君になくても他人からはあるのさ。
ただ、償えない罪はない。
希望は残っているよ。どんな時にもね。

Really want to do the Fuyutsuki monologue scene, but can't find a transcription of it yet.

[akoss]

I don't have a github account (honestly never heard of it until now), but meantime I'll paste whatever I accomplish in here.

Here's Kaworu telling Shinji about Third Impact. Please respond only with translation-related issues, and take other thoughts that might come to mind to the relevant discussion threads. If I have to do more split-merges, I'll be very unhappy.

[...]

Really want to do the Fuyutsuki monologue scene, but can't find a transcription of it yet.

Added to https://github.com/eva3/Evangelion--3.0-Translation/blob/master/TRANSLATION
Good work.

Concerning Fuyutsuki monologue scene, it may be available soon in text format. Don't worry.

[Sailor Star Dust]

Shinji meeting Sakura, meeting Asuka again, and finding out about Rei. Some parts I'm a little unsure of. Those are marked.

26:31 through 28:52  SPOILER: Show

Sakura: Right. Um, it's a late hour but I'm the medical officer in charge(? 管理担当医官). Second Lt Suzuhara Sakura. Nice to meet you.

Shinji: Ah, y-yes.

Shinji: But, Suzuhara... Touji's?

Sakura: Ah, yes. You've helped my big brother. I'm his little sister Sakura.

Shinji: Little sister? Don't you mean big sister?

Sakura: Yes, his little sister.

Shinji: L-little sister...? How?

Asuka: 14 years have passed since then. Stupid Shinji.

Shinji: Huh, Ah, Asuka!

Shinji: I'm glad! You are safe, Asuka!

Asuka: I can't. [You're? I'm?] overwhelmed (? 抑えきれない) Always show restraint.

Shinji: What was that about...

Asuka: Built up anger and grief.

Shinji: What do you mean... Ah, Asuka, your left eye...

Asuka: That has nothing to do with you.

Shinji: Asuka. You said 14 years, but nothing has changed except that eyepatch.

Asuka: Right. It's Eva's Curse.

Shinji: Curse?

Shinji: Wait! Asuka, maybe you'll know! Where's Ayanami?!

Asuka: I don't know.

Shinji: You don't know? But I saved her at that time!

Asuka: You really exaggerate. (? 人、一人に大げさね) This world doesn't have any time to respond to that kind of thing. Isn't that right, Col Katsuragi?

Shinji: Asuka!

Shinji: Misato-san, where's Ayanami?! Please tell me!

Misato: Shinji-kun. Ayanami Rei doesn't exist anymore.

Shinji: No, I'm certain I saved her. She must still be in Eva-01's plug. Please search for her!

Ritsuko: Naturally, we already arranged to thoroughly search Eva-01. The outcome was finding you, and for some reason, this was restored. The inspection results had no problems. We'll return it.(? 返還しておきます)

(The SDAT is handed back to Shinji)

Shinji: My father's... At that time Ayanami was holding it. So I saved her, didn't I?

[akoss]

Shinji meeting Sakura, meeting Asuka again, and finding out about Rei. Some parts I'm a little unsure of. Those are marked.

26:31 through 28:52  SPOILER: Show

Great.
Added to the file!

https://github.com/eva3/Evangelion--3.0-Translation/commit/bae6fa25b8eb6f722675292da99e01841109ceb3

[Kendrix]

Just did some checking, and Mari gets out (means unclear) after force ejecting Shinji's plug from Eva-13. So she's fine.

Are you sure? She got ejected? Was it said/shown? I don't want her to be dead yet T~T

Also, thanks everyone. To think that we'll get close to having a script so soon. It seems really good so far.
Like the player as hook that Rei may not be truly gone. Also, collar = sin, and Kaworu takes it? They couldn't have made the messiac parallels stronger.