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Postby brer rabbit » Wed Jan 18, 2017 10:25 pm

I have an idea for EVA fic involving Kensuke as a pilot, but it comes with a twist. We all known a pilot needs to open themselves in order to connect with their mother souls but what happens if the mother's soul does not want to connect with their child. I plan on giving Kensuke a backstory in where his mother abandoned him immediately after he was born (she never hold him or even looked at him) because she never wanted kids and saw the boy as quote "a drunken mistake" and that her job in the military was more important. (the only reason she didn't not get a abortion because she thought it was wrong to take a life that had no chance to fight back) The premise of the story is Kensuke trying to connect with someone who never wanted him.(Kensuke knows all of this too and despite that he still loves his mother)

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Postby Squigsquasher » Thu Jan 19, 2017 7:11 am

View Original Postbrer rabbit wrote:I have an idea for EVA fic involving Kensuke as a pilot, but it comes with a twist. We all known a pilot needs to open themselves in order to connect with their mother souls but what happens if the mother's soul does not want to connect with their child. I plan on giving Kensuke a backstory in where his mother abandoned him immediately after he was born (she never hold him or even looked at him) because she never wanted kids and saw the boy as quote "a drunken mistake" and that her job in the military was more important. (the only reason she didn't not get a abortion because she thought it was wrong to take a life that had no chance to fight back) The premise of the story is Kensuke trying to connect with someone who never wanted him.(Kensuke knows all of this too and despite that he still loves his mother)

That...actually works pretty well. I'd like to see someone do that.

Once I've either finished or abandoned (hopefully the former) Some Do Not Like It Hot, I too plan on doing a fic where Kensuke gets to be a pilot...and Hikari. And Touji (except properly this time). Except instead of LOLDRAMA there will be action, laughter and romance.

My dream fic/yet another retarded AU  SPOILER: Show
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TLDR: Eva but Action Arc all the way through with added silliness and a few canon immigrants.

Based largely on the TV version, with elements of other series sprinkled in for flavor. It starts fairly normally, with Shinji getting summoned to Tokyo-3 to get in the robot and all that jazz. The thing runs very similarly to the actual show (albeit far less grim) until Asuka's introduction. Then, things go completely off the wall...

The fic would have somewhat more of a hardware focus than the actual show (if that's even possible) with all kinds of gimmicky weapons, equipment and things, both as a homage to old toy-selling anime, and because silly weapons are fun to write. This goes completely up to 11 after the Bardiel episode (in which Unit 03 is not destroyed and goes on to become Touji's Eva, although Touji does lose his leg in the process) and after that, rather than getting the descent arc, the fic abandons all pretenses of sticking to canon- extracanonical Angels appear, Kensuke and Hikari become pilots, and the Evas go into SPAAAAAAACE.

Notable features/shitty gimmicks will include...

>After losing his leg, Touji gets a badass robotic replacement. In addition, the repaired Unit 03 incorporates the remains of Bardiel as a secondary core, enabling the use of "Berserker Drive"- essentially a Beast Mode, in which Unit 03 sprouts extra arms and generally goes mental, giving increased fighting capacity at some risk to the pilot.
>After Zeruel (who shows up after some other "filler" Angels) the cast goes into space, except without the timeskip and everyone becoming an OOC dick this time.
>Mari shows up in the SPACE arc, piloting Space Type Evangelion Unit 08.
>Kaworu doesn't die after his initial appearance and goes on to pilot the Mark 06, becoming a recurring rival for Shinji.
>Kensuke pilots Defence Type Evangelion Unit 04 (which is recovered from NERV Nevada during a daring rescue mission in the depths of the Dirac Sea).
>Hikari pilots High Mobility Type Evangelion Unit 05 (which is basically Rebuild's Unit 05 run through a TV filter).
>Unit 07 actually appears this time, piloted by NERV's most dangerous enemy yet...Shinji's abhorrent admirer Mana Kirishima.
>Everyone ends up paired up with someone. Because everybody needs somebody, after all.
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Postby amitakartok » Thu Jan 19, 2017 12:09 pm

You could be less obvious at ripping off my stuff with added silliness filter, you know. :tongue:
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Postby Squigsquasher » Thu Jan 19, 2017 1:25 pm

View Original Postamitakartok wrote:You could be less obvious at ripping off my stuff with added silliness filter, you know. :tongue:

...Whoops!

I haven't actually read your stuff (though I totally should if it's anything like that) so any plagiarism is entirely coincidental. Never attribute to malice what can be attributed to incompetence and all that. Ahem.

Not that one can ever have enough silly action fics.
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Postby amitakartok » Thu Jan 19, 2017 4:41 pm

Maybe.

Though mine is definitely isn't silly. I recently received criticism that it goes too far from canon and into in-name-only territory - to which my reaction was inwardly snickering that the overwhelming majority of my readers have no goddamn idea what's coming.

Or maybe they're just offended at Shinji not being the one who gets shat upon by the universe this time around. Or that Rei isn't a Gendo-brainwashed moeblob with an identity crisis, but a superpowered killer who puts on a display of hostility and anti-social attitude to hide how badly broken she really is. Or that Asuka isn't a bitchy super-tsundere acting like she's hot shit, but a bitchy girl who actually knows what she's talking about and instantly drops the attitude when it really matters.
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Postby Kendrix » Wed Feb 22, 2017 12:03 pm

Fantasy AU in which EVA 01 is a cursed sword that poor Shin-chan pulled from a stone, Asuka is a valkyre esque warrior lady, Gendo is a dark sorceror, and the local kingdom has a bunch of lovely princesses who are all Rei.

Ritsuko - Magician; The Magi are a wicked stepmother style magic mirror that is a family heirloom
Misato - the one gun user
Kaji - Obviously rogue/thief
Mari - Huntress/ Beastmaster. Has a bow & arrow instead of her sniper rifle. Possibly an Orc.
Kaworu - Palladin. At least part Elf; Shinji catches him bathing in a clearing or something
Touji - bruiser
Hikari - white mage/ healer. Little Sakura eventually becomes her apprentice
Kensuke - Totally the Bard
The Rei sisters are all various kinds of mages.

Shinji has the usual "adopted by peasants, actually of royal blood" thing going on, possibly with a twist.
Also, there is Puchi Eva style adorable Rei interaction, complete with that plot point where Au!Rei very conspicously substitutes for a sick Rei II.
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Postby Rommel » Thu Mar 16, 2017 7:19 pm

Um, so thanks to one of my pre-readers I decided to write a fic that includes all the preview bits from the trailer at the end of 2.0

Wish me luck.

PS: It will include Gendo and Fuyutsuki going hiking with a donkey.

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Postby RadicalRandy » Thu Mar 16, 2017 7:21 pm

View Original PostRommel wrote:PS: It will include Gendo and Fuyutsuki going hiking with a donkey.


I need this. I never knew I did before, but I definitely do now.
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Postby Glor » Fri Mar 17, 2017 6:44 pm

View Original PostRommel wrote:write a fic


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Postby amitakartok » Fri Mar 17, 2017 7:07 pm

Don't be too hyped, Glor. He'll likely get bored and lose interest a few chapters in.
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Postby Rommel » Fri Mar 17, 2017 7:58 pm

I finished Genocide, didn't I?

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Postby amitakartok » Sat Mar 18, 2017 8:08 am

That was before you explicitly expressed loss of interest in writing non-pornographic novel-length pieces due to no one meaningfully reviewing those anymore.
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Postby Rommel » Sat Mar 18, 2017 9:19 am

So let me get this straight: I post saying I'm trying to work on something new and your response is to bitch at me for previously saying I wasn't interested. I wonder, do you think this is MORE or LESS likely to get a story finished, or is it just complaining for the sake of complaining?

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Postby Bagheera » Sat Mar 18, 2017 2:57 pm

I share Glor's reaction, and look forward to hearing the donkey's tale.
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Postby silvermoonlight » Sat Mar 18, 2017 3:16 pm

View Original PostRommel wrote:PS: It will include Gendo and Fuyutsuki going hiking with a donkey.


The whole mental image of that cracks me up, please write it ^_^
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Postby RadicalRandy » Sat Mar 18, 2017 5:00 pm

Is the donkey's name going to be Yui?
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Postby amitakartok » Sat Mar 18, 2017 6:47 pm

View Original PostRommel wrote:So let me get this straight: I post saying I'm trying to work on something new and your response is to bitch at me for previously saying I wasn't interested. I wonder, do you think this is MORE or LESS likely to get a story finished, or is it just complaining for the sake of complaining?


I wasn't trying to start shit or anything. I simply pointed out how unexpected your sudden change of heart was.

If you do get it done, all the better.
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Postby BlueBasilisk » Tue Mar 21, 2017 6:43 pm

View Original PostRommel wrote:Um, so thanks to one of my pre-readers I decided to write a fic that includes all the preview bits from the trailer at the end of 2.0

Wish me luck.

PS: It will include Gendo and Fuyutsuki going hiking with a donkey.


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Postby Bagheera » Tue Mar 21, 2017 7:05 pm

That donkey has seen some shit. His story must be told.
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Postby Rommel » Thu Mar 23, 2017 1:54 pm

View Original PostBagheera wrote:That donkey has seen some shit. His story must be told.


It would probably be a flashback of some sort, probably a few chapters in.

Also, it probably is no surprise that is a pretty grim story, as it needs to be following up on the end of 2.0. I really should watch that again.


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