The speaker messes up one indirect pronoun, but it's "einsamer Mensch", which means "lonely human". Hm.

And, just for your amusement, in the end, she says "Vater", "father" instead of "mother". Ha, so much 'bout that, Asuka.

I think their relationship is much closer to a romance in the manga than in the anime; yet I don't think it will really work out as a couple. As Shinji said, his feelings for her can't be expressed with "I like her" or "I'd like to be with her" but it's like she&#...

@Sailor Star Dust Oh - okay, I was right, it is really dirty XD And it's funny nonetheless *g* Um, yeah, there's an update... Chapter two is out now! Woohoo! Took me long enough, mind you. But after Mr. Tines gave me a really good criticism (good as in, really helpful), I just had to...

And as a side note, nowhere in the entire show does anyone ever say or confirm that Kaworu = Tabris. Irony is wasted on the young 'uns. I'm just too stupid to recognize irony in English even if it jumps into my face :oops: But, you know, in NGE fandom, you can be deadly sure there are peopl...

Hm, I don't know. Look, there has to be a reason that there is an angel of free will - he has to differ from the other angels, otherwise there would be no reason to be the "free angel", he could just as well be the angel of light or electricity or trees or whatever. If they all have a ...

@Ornette Coleman Umm... But, you know, it's emphasized with his death that he indeed does have the gift of free will - which angel could it be but Tabris? And don't forget all the stuff in the Adam photofile for example where it clearly is said that he is Tabris. And, anyhoo, we would lack a...

I think the question would then become what makes an Angel an Angel. Being an offspring of Adam? Well, Kaworu wasn't "born" from Adam. According to him his body was "made" out of the same stuff the Evas were, and his soul IS Adam. You know, I'm still wondering about the ...

Why wouldn't humans have free will? Hm, I still don't think you could say humans and angels are the same... They are to a huge extent, yes, but there has to be some difference, otherwise the match would be 100% instead of 99,something. I think angels are much more driven by their instincts ...

[code:1]Kaworu was deceived, but from knowing Shinji he changed his mind abut stuff. This is the part that drove me crazy because I was under the impression Angels had no free will.[/code:1]

Well, he is the Angel of Free Will. That should explain something, right?

@Mr Tines Phew, you just got me into redoing all my writing up to now... I'm just at about the middle of page 1 of chapter 2 and have already added about 200 words *cough* I used to be very over-descriptive earlier and was keen to be a little more straightforward, but now it's all coming bac...

Your written English is good (better than a number of native speakers whose work I've had to deal with). Only the first chapter is up, so far? There is a bit of first chapter awkwardness , in setting the scene, but that it to be expected. The main thing I would ask for is more descripti...

Hi there! This is actually kind of a debut for me since it's the first fanfiction in English I actually publish. (I've been writing for years, so it's not my first story, but my other English ffs are stored on my pc and cry.) It's about Kaworu/Shinji, so don't like, don&#...

Kaworu: I'm Kaworu Nagisa. We meet again. Asuka: Well hello, homo-boy. Kaworu: I really wish you wouldn't make statements when you lack evidence for them. Oh, Sorry, I suppose the only things you lack are restraint and brains. Doesn't he technically take back his last comment with the &...

@Timstuff All I have to say to your post is this: amen. Even better; as the joke would work for obvious reasons: Sailor Misato because in the name of the beer, she'll punish you and appearing beautifully, Sailor Shinji! (Please say you get the gag? ^^; eg, Mitsuishi Kotono=Usagi, Misato whil...

Again, I don't think a soul can have a gender at all. (Isn't there some difference between sex and gender? Sorry, in German it's one and the same, so the concept seems a little weird to me ^^") A soul is your inner core, the part deepest inside you that defines your whole be...

*giggles at the purity line* "saite da...orette." (Although doing sexual things doesn't mean you can't be pure; eg, you can still be a good person/have innocence about you, at least I think so. ...He still seems to be a "prude" after that, anyway, eg, his disgusted r...

In my opinion, Kaworu is male. Generally, a soul does not have reproductive organs, so even if we assume Adam is a female, Kaworu's body is not Adam's body. They may be the same person on a spiritual level, but it's as simple as that. That's what I said :D They may share the soul bu...

Hi there! This is something that really got me thinking for some time, so please no one hit me for asking this. Can Kaworu be female? I mean, I personally always saw him as a boy - until I came across the theory that Adam must be female ("our mother" or something along the lines) a...

This post contains spoilers for the later manga stages! I personally can't understand why Shinji lacks fans. He's one of the most beautiful (I'm not talking about his looks, if anyone wonders, though I have to say he's a cutie 8) ) characters I've ever seen in anime/m...