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by PenPen4life
Wed Jun 27, 2018 1:50 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 108
Views: 10909

Re: An Insider's Look

NGL, having reached the peaks of writing, 7.3 was a bump in your road to g.o.a.tness. Filler isn't intrinsically bad. But as with everything else in a story, filler should be compelling. The reader should be invested. But while it started nicely, you didn't really follow through. There is much good,...
by PenPen4life
Sun Jun 24, 2018 1:50 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: NGE 2: Legacy(Final Form)
Replies: 1
Views: 1102

Re: NGE 2: Legacy(Final Form)

oops, i've given yall the wrong link
by PenPen4life
Wed Jun 06, 2018 7:07 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: Is there any good NGE fanfic?
Replies: 70
Views: 24295

Re: Is there any good NGE fanfic?

I know how that feels. My story, although seemingly an AU and a crossover, is actually 100% canon-compliant in a way that won't be revealed for at least 250,000 words in. In the past two months, the first chapter had 50+ hits per month on FF.net, which dropped into single digits by the third chapte...
by PenPen4life
Mon Jun 04, 2018 7:12 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: Is there any good NGE fanfic?
Replies: 70
Views: 24295

Re: Is there any good NGE fanfic?

Me too. It's just that when you look at the absolutely massive devastation in the Hakone region by Third Impact and see a sequel flat-out ignore both it and the massive, irrecoverable trauma the kids went through during the whole ordeal in favor of returning to the mid-show status quo for high scho...
by PenPen4life
Mon Jun 04, 2018 6:00 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 108
Views: 10909

Re: An Insider's Look

Have my eyes deicieved me? Has Gryphon wrote a chapter without expositing emotions?

Damn, lebron james of evageeks, no doubt. (also, three new nge 2 chapters are out ^_^ )
by PenPen4life
Mon Jun 04, 2018 5:38 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: Is there any good NGE fanfic?
Replies: 70
Views: 24295

Re: Is there any good NGE fanfic?

Sequel... only makes me feel like the author thinks he/she can outdo the original. So, no. You're confusing a sequel for a reboot. A sequel that doesn't build off the lore isn't really a sequel, it's just being marketed as one. Many sequels do try that trick, but as always, I look at art for the pe...
by PenPen4life
Sun Jun 03, 2018 6:48 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: Is there any good NGE fanfic?
Replies: 70
Views: 24295

Re: Is there any good NGE fanfic?

I discovered this thread only after the last post and found it very interesting as I completely agree with Bagheera's first post. I'd love to read more EVA fanfic but I could not care less about AU, crossovers, or time travels. None of the above are in this one: https://forums.sufficientvelocity.co...
by PenPen4life
Fri Jun 01, 2018 6:51 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: NGE 2: Legacy(Final Form)
Replies: 1
Views: 1102

NGE 2: Legacy(Final Form)

Here's this stories final destination. The chapters here have been signifcantly edited from the orginal eva geek version and are still being edited on the constant. This doesn't mean the story's over(it's getting close), but here's where the fianl version of the story will be: https://forums.suffici...
by PenPen4life
Fri Jun 01, 2018 3:15 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 108
Views: 10909

Re: An Insider's Look

This remains the best fan fic I've ever read here.
by PenPen4life
Thu May 31, 2018 11:06 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: Is there any good NGE fanfic?
Replies: 70
Views: 24295

Re: Is there any good NGE fanfic?

i think this one might be worth a read: https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/nge-2-legacy.47239/#post-10770285 ^_^ -> is a direct sequel to NGE(picks off right when eoe ends) -> is uniquely written and structured like an episode to simulate the effect of watching a show -> is character driv...
by PenPen4life
Mon Apr 30, 2018 1:28 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: Evangelion 2: A Legacy of Angels
Replies: 29
Views: 4995

Re: Evangelion 2: A Legacy of Angels

Episode 7: INSIDE THE MIND The Case of Asuka Langley Soryu A child walked towards her. Red hair was parted symmetrically by two beads. A dress spread around her little legs. A monkey held in her arms, stuffed. “Welcome back,” the child smiled, “Asuka.” “I’m not the same girl you remember.” “You loo...

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