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by Gryphon117
Sun May 20, 2018 4:39 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 62
Views: 2958

Re: An Insider's Look

Update time, and it is an extra large one, as promised! By the way, remember that time I mentioned the possibility of an update not happening one of these weeks? Well, that time might very well be next week. Several RL issues have kept me from getting much writing done this weekend, and I've gotta g...
by Gryphon117
Sun May 13, 2018 11:41 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 62
Views: 2958

Re: An Insider's Look

Shorter update this week, I'm afraid. This was one scene I had initially wanted to throw in together with the previous one as a way of finishing the chapter, but it just wasn't ready in time. Probably for the best, since I wouldn't have had anything to update with today, otherwise. The next update w...
by Gryphon117
Mon May 07, 2018 2:44 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 62
Views: 2958

Re: An Insider's Look

xanderkh#878139 wrote:Well done. :)


Thanks, I'll strive to keep on pleasing! Any suspicions as to who might be showing up next part? :shifty:
by Gryphon117
Sun May 06, 2018 11:56 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 62
Views: 2958

Re: An Insider's Look

Update time! In which we continue exploring the aftermath of this chapter's synch-test. Enjoy! ^_^ “Did you hear that?! Eighty-seven percent! That’s awesome !” Ace cheered loudly, running up and down the kitchen and almost bouncing off the walls in a surprising outburst of sheer enthusiasm. Shinji f...
by Gryphon117
Sun Apr 29, 2018 10:18 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 62
Views: 2958

Re: An Insider's Look

Big meaty update today, and a heads-up that I might have to skip an update day one of these coming weeks, depending on how much time to write I end up finding. With final evaluation season coming up closer and closer I'll probably hit a spike in workload at some point, and depending on the day it la...
by Gryphon117
Tue Apr 24, 2018 2:58 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 62
Views: 2958

Re: An Insider's Look

One of many, you mean? :shifty:
by Gryphon117
Mon Apr 23, 2018 3:48 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 62
Views: 2958

Re: An Insider's Look

Update time, the second half of which was pretty fun to write! ^_^ ‘Here it is, Asuka,’ the Second Child mused, staring at the white cylinders of the Test Plugs through the observation pane. ‘Your last day as an EVA Pilot.’ In what had to be a first occurrence since her arrival in Tokyo-3, Asuka was...
by Gryphon117
Sun Apr 15, 2018 5:01 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 62
Views: 2958

Re: An Insider's Look

Update time, with the final part of Chapter 5 (finally)! Today, we meet up with Ritsuko and find out a bit more about her background dealings. Next week's update will be a bundle of a few short scenes, mostly Shinji-centric. Altogether, I expect Chapter 6 to be roughly half the size of this one, pro...
by Gryphon117
Tue Apr 10, 2018 10:42 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 62
Views: 2958

Re: An Insider's Look

A bit late on this week's update, forgive the delay. ^_^ ‘What am I doing here? I should be in my room getting rest for tomorrow. Is it because of what Wondergirl said? Since when do you let her get to you so much, Asuka?’ Asuka Langley-Sohryu stood before the door of Cranial Ward room 303, her hand...
by Gryphon117
Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:42 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: Evangelion 2: A Legacy of Angels
Replies: 29
Views: 2422

Re: Evangelion 2: A Legacy of Angels

Looks clearer and easier to understand than the previous chapters (from what I recall), but I'm afraid that I don't have any more feedback to offer that wouldn't repeat things I've said before. Still, kudos on the improvement.
by Gryphon117
Tue Apr 03, 2018 7:34 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 62
Views: 2958

Re: An Insider's Look

If u say april fools, no one's gonna fall for it -_- It didn't on Sunday. I changed the title of the spoiler yesterday when the actual snippet went up, since it was pointless and perhaps confusing to have two 'Chapter 5-5's. Besides, that update wasn't meant to be anything believable in the first p...
by Gryphon117
Mon Apr 02, 2018 9:37 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 62
Views: 2958

Re: An Insider's Look

Okay, here's the actual update for the week. ^_^ Shinji Ikari tossed and turned in his bed. He felt exhausted, but his body and mind just plain refused to surrender to the comforts of sleep. Maybe due to a few remnants of adrenaline still coursing through his body, or because the myriad thoughts and...
by Gryphon117
Sun Apr 01, 2018 6:28 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 62
Views: 2958

Re: An Insider's Look

Shinji Ikari tossed and turned in his bed. He felt exhausted, but his body and mind just plain refused to surrender to the comforts of sleep. Maybe due to a few remnants of adrenaline still coursing through his body, or because the myriad thoughts and revelations of the last few hours still cruised...
by Gryphon117
Wed Mar 28, 2018 8:31 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 62
Views: 2958

Re: An Insider's Look

Perhaps you are right. I'll mark those bits for consideration and take a good look at improving them once I get around to doing the second round of writing. Considering how unsatisfied I am with it, the scene is probably going to be redone from top to bottom, anyway. By the way, surprise extra updat...
by Gryphon117
Tue Mar 27, 2018 10:44 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 62
Views: 2958

Re: An Insider's Look

Thanks, the feedback is appreciated, as always. Sorry for the late response, but I've been a bit busy these last few days. As for the emotional exposition, I agree that it's probably not entirely necessary, but I'll also say that this is the way I like to roll with things. I'm a big fan of narration...
by Gryphon117
Sun Mar 25, 2018 8:17 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 62
Views: 2958

Re: An Insider's Look

Update time today, although I'm afraid that this is one of those scenes that will probably benefit from some reworking when I begin re-editing the chapters for their posting in FFN or wherever somewhere down the line. It feels as if it's a little all over the place, and not to the same standards as ...
by Gryphon117
Sun Mar 18, 2018 4:22 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 62
Views: 2958

Re: An Insider's Look

what should i do? What you feel like doing. It's not like you're getting paid to write, so if the body asks you to do something else, you should. ^_^ Here's the update, by the way. Enjoy, you guys. “I’m here to interrogate the prisoner." Ritsuko Akagi’s request echoed slightly down the long an...
by Gryphon117
Sat Mar 17, 2018 5:42 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 62
Views: 2958

Re: An Insider's Look

Thanks, it's always nice to see in-depth feedback that's clear on the points to improve. And yeah, the narration thing is definitely the improvement area that pops up the most, now and in the past. I'll try to strike a better balance in the future. Updating tomorrow. Probably in the early morning si...
by Gryphon117
Mon Mar 12, 2018 6:49 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 62
Views: 2958

Re: An Insider's Look

Asuka'sBigBrother wrote:damn, no doubt bout your creativity


Thanks, but the concepts I'm using in this scene are really not that creative. I'm mostly lifting them off of other media I've enjoyed, for the most part.
by Gryphon117
Sun Mar 11, 2018 4:28 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 62
Views: 2958

Re: An Insider's Look

Sunday's back, so that means it's update time. Here we start with the first scene of Chapter 5, which is probably going to be the biggest chapter to date, as I previously mentioned. Today, we catch back up with a shell-shocked Shinji and find out a little bit more about what kind of situation what h...

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