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by Gryphon117
Sat Jan 26, 2019 4:11 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 115
Views: 12738

Re: An Insider's Look

He was little more than a kid, the way he rocked back and forth reminding her of a child moaning about a scraped knee, not unlike one of the many she had cared for in a previous life that didn’t matter anymore. The cause of Kotaro Ikawa’s ills, however, was nothing quite so innocent. In fact, and d...
by Gryphon117
Thu Jan 17, 2019 12:36 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 115
Views: 12738

Re: An Insider's Look

I personally don't enjoy OCs who add nothing to the plot at hand, so I'll definitely try to avoid falling into that same hole. Thanks for the warning, anyway. :wink:
by Gryphon117
Mon Jan 14, 2019 12:35 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 115
Views: 12738

Re: An Insider's Look

Sorry for being a day late to the conclusion of this chapter, but doing a fair share of the paperwork to buy myself a flat took a lot of the time I had this past weekend. It's been fun but, hey, at least I'll stop having to pay an exorbitant amount of rent every month of my life! That's worth a head...
by Gryphon117
Sat Jan 05, 2019 10:31 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 115
Views: 12738

Re: An Insider's Look

“Why not?” Asuka harped from behind. “Just tell him to follow and he will, it’s not like that moron knows how to do anything else.” The Second Child then found herself observed by her fellow Pilots, Makinami doing that annoying thing with her face that meant she knew Asuka was missing something. Ev...
by Gryphon117
Sat Jan 05, 2019 10:29 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 115
Views: 12738

Re: An Insider's Look

Woah, almost a month of no postings! Sorry it took me this long to post these, but I've been pretty busy during the holidays and didn't have the time to manually format them. Better late than never, though! ^_^ This update ends my short story foray for the time being, so the next updates will be goi...
by Gryphon117
Sun Dec 16, 2018 9:04 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 115
Views: 12738

Re: An Insider's Look

Update time, and it's Rei's turn to shine, breaking records and leaving her two former teammates in the dust as far as word count goes! I had quite a bit of fun with this one, since Rei's bit is one of those that I had fairly clear in my head ever sicne before I started to write Shinji's. I hope you...
by Gryphon117
Sun Dec 02, 2018 4:37 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 115
Views: 12738

Re: An Insider's Look

Second character snippet is done, with two more planned until I try my luck at tackling AIL once again. This time we have Asuka in the spotlight, so let me know what you guys think. ^_^ I think the first word to describe my Mommy would be ‘demanding’. She doesn’t want me to be perfect at everything,...
by Gryphon117
Fri Nov 16, 2018 9:36 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 115
Views: 12738

Re: An Insider's Look

Hiya, I'm back again, although not with the usual menu, I'm afraid. I've been struggling to come up with an end to the previous scene that was to my liking (there's something about young girls discussing boys that I can't wrap my head around, apparently) and, in case it wasn't obvious, my efforts ha...
by Gryphon117
Sun Nov 04, 2018 8:37 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 115
Views: 12738

Re: An Insider's Look

I bring another short update today, one that sadly doesn't quite manage to finish the current scene, either. This schoolyear isn't being generous on the out of work obligations so far, I'm afraid. Essentially, I've been hit with job training for my Wednesday afternoons these past two weeks and all t...
by Gryphon117
Sun Oct 21, 2018 7:47 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 115
Views: 12738

Re: An Insider's Look

A bit of an early update, since I'm going to be having a hell of a time next week and don't think I'll have an opportunity to expand on this scene before Wednesday, so I thought that there was no point in waiting until then. This is roughly half of the scene I want to write, but I'm afraid the other...
by Gryphon117
Sun Oct 14, 2018 7:55 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 115
Views: 12738

Re: An Insider's Look

Another Sunday means another update, and with this one we've broken 100k words of An insider's Look! Let's see if I can suceed at having things more or less wrapped up for our characters in another a hundred thousand, or so. :tongue: But in the meantime, enjoy! ^_^ “Until the three of you learn to w...
by Gryphon117
Wed Oct 03, 2018 9:09 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 115
Views: 12738

Re: An Insider's Look

Update time, as promised. Next one will be going up on October 14th, should everything end up conforming to plan. ^_^ Now, if you'll excuse me, the brain demands a short nap. *crawls to the bed* The rays of light that came from the hospital window made the young man laying within the room look at pe...
by Gryphon117
Sun Sep 30, 2018 7:15 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 115
Views: 12738

Re: An Insider's Look

I've been swamped with work this entire week, so there won't be an update today, folks. The scene itself is mostly done, but with some final touches here and there still remaining I'm quite probably going to be pushing the update until next Wednesday. From there on, I think I'm going to be trying to...
by Gryphon117
Sun Sep 23, 2018 11:10 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 115
Views: 12738

Re: An Insider's Look

Update time, bringing in the opening of Chapter 10. This one will probably be shorter than most since there isn't a whole lot of stuff left to cover in the day, but I've been known to prove that line wrong in the past already so we'll see how things turn out. In other news, the start of the schoolye...
by Gryphon117
Sun Sep 16, 2018 5:34 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 115
Views: 12738

Re: An Insider's Look

Today we continue where we left off, with the finishing touches to Chapter 9. Let me know what you guys think. ^_^ ‘Yet. Nobody would have bet on mankind putting a man on the moon a hundred years ago, either. Didn’t stop us from doing it,’ Mari promptly replied, applying some seldom used sobriety to...
by Gryphon117
Sun Sep 09, 2018 2:31 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 115
Views: 12738

Re: An Insider's Look

So it seems this organization knows quiet a bit about the nature of the Evas. I'm looking forward to learning more about them. I also wasn't expecting Yui to be conscious enough to actually carry on a conversation with someone. Anyway, great job with the chapter. Each one has definitely been worth ...
by Gryphon117
Sun Sep 09, 2018 6:36 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 115
Views: 12738

Re: An Insider's Look

Update time! With a split up scene, as previously mentioned. The remaining bit and the end of the chapter will come next week, since I'm starting to believe that Chapter 9 will get too massive for its own good unless I split it up, as well. In any case, enjoy! ^_^ “Mmm... the smell of LCL...” the Fi...
by Gryphon117
Sun Sep 02, 2018 4:51 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 115
Views: 12738

Re: An Insider's Look

Preparations for the new schoolyear begin in earnest tomorrow, so I might be quite busy for a couple of days on top of the usual writing time loss that work brings with it. I've got another scene in the chamber already (or half of one, since it's a pretty large one I'll probably split), but just be ...
by Gryphon117
Sun Aug 26, 2018 5:39 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 115
Views: 12738

Re: An Insider's Look

That's understandable. It's always sucks when you find a great story only to find out it wasn't finished. Also don't worry about not getting that many views. Your stories might not be the most well known, but they're easily some of the best. 'Legacy of the Forgotten' is in my top 5, and I've read a...
by Gryphon117
Sun Aug 26, 2018 4:53 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 115
Views: 12738

Re: An Insider's Look

I thought it might be influenced by 'Mind Games'. It was a pretty good story and I'm glad to see one of my favorite authors is doing their own version of it. Maybe someday someone will do their own take on 'Deus Ex Evangelion'. Also you might get more feedback if you post this on FFN or SV. They se...

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