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by Asuka'sBigBrother
Sat Feb 24, 2018 11:19 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: From Your Lips to the Author's Ears: Story Ideas
Replies: 1911
Views: 153481

Re: From Your Lips to the Author's Ears: Story Ideas

@gob hobblin Well written stories have universal appeal, irrelvant of how interesting the subject is. And it's not a lottery to write a well writeen, there's objective things like dialogoue, description, characterization, development, ect. that you can excel with irreleavnt of the premise. The threa...
by Asuka'sBigBrother
Fri Feb 23, 2018 5:21 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: From Your Lips to the Author's Ears: Story Ideas
Replies: 1911
Views: 153481

Re: From Your Lips to the Author's Ears: Story Ideas

I made a joke because it was an irrelevant and deflectionary question. You seem to have missed the joke so I poked you for it. Let’s get to the heart of this. First off, it’s not a “lottery”, it’s looking at the two stories, seeing what elements blend well and then approaching the story based on the...
by Asuka'sBigBrother
Fri Feb 23, 2018 7:41 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: FanFiction Requests/Recommendations/Discussion etc.
Replies: 931
Views: 111297

Re: FanFiction Requests/Recommendations/Discussion etc.

Check out Bagheera's Ghosts of Evangelion . Read some of it, didn't really like it. I respect the insane amount of effort that probably went into it, but it wasn't really my cup of tea. I'm more abour relationships being used to develop characters, not using character development to develop a relat...
by Asuka'sBigBrother
Fri Feb 23, 2018 7:21 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: From Your Lips to the Author's Ears: Story Ideas
Replies: 1911
Views: 153481

Re: From Your Lips to the Author's Ears: Story Ideas

Because silvermoonlight challenged you to write a story . And I'm not obligated to accept that challenge because my own capacity to do so is irrelevant to my argument. Furthermore, even if I was capable of doing so, I'm not obligated to put my skills in a topic that doesn't interest me. All I argue...
by Asuka'sBigBrother
Fri Feb 23, 2018 4:55 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: From Your Lips to the Author's Ears: Story Ideas
Replies: 1911
Views: 153481

Re: From Your Lips to the Author's Ears: Story Ideas

That's not a story, that's a sequence of events. Why would that be interesting? What I find is interesting is how you were actually expecting me to write a story... But nah, "if it can be done, why don't u do it?" isn't a legit argument. I haven't made a lilo and stitch/Kim Possible cross...
by Asuka'sBigBrother
Fri Feb 23, 2018 4:39 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: FanFiction Requests/Recommendations/Discussion etc.
Replies: 931
Views: 111297

Re: FanFiction Requests/Recommendations/Discussion etc.

Cybermat47#874298 wrote:Check out Neon Genesis Evangelion by Hideaki Anno.


I meant after instrumentality -_-
by Asuka'sBigBrother
Fri Feb 23, 2018 4:37 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: From Your Lips to the Author's Ears: Story Ideas
Replies: 1911
Views: 153481

Re: From Your Lips to the Author's Ears: Story Ideas

silvermoonlight#874259 wrote:Then please show us your skill and make it work.

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Tommy meets Asuka. Asuka and Tommy play on a slide. Tommy and Asuka go home.
by Asuka'sBigBrother
Thu Feb 22, 2018 6:47 pm
Forum: Rebuild of Evangelion
Topic: What are the "Adams"?
Replies: 225
Views: 94972

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Gendo'sPapa#148053 wrote:No more a slap on the wrist than those American kids who watch some anime and feel like popping random words of Japanese in their speech is cool.

It's not.

I use baka in my speech, whatchu gonna do bout it.
by Asuka'sBigBrother
Thu Feb 22, 2018 6:42 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: How do you like your Gendo?
Replies: 33
Views: 1291

Re: How do you like your Gendo?

That said the plot of a given fanfic often necessitates that he be the antagonists because his canonical goals run very much contrary to those of most main characters. He's not a nice person either and that would be even more inaccurate. Not really. His goal, to avoid instrumentality and extinction...
by Asuka'sBigBrother
Thu Feb 22, 2018 6:12 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: FanFiction Requests/Recommendations/Discussion etc.
Replies: 931
Views: 111297

Re: FanFiction Requests/Recommendations/Discussion etc.

how about ->a one shot about gendo, ritsuko, and kyoko chillin in instrumentality. I would prefer they don't get out, but we get a slimpse into their experiences -> a story focusing on Misato as she tries to take care of adoptive kids as a single mom -> a story about Kaji trying to sever all ties ha...
by Asuka'sBigBrother
Thu Feb 22, 2018 2:17 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: From Your Lips to the Author's Ears: Story Ideas
Replies: 1911
Views: 153481

Re: From Your Lips to the Author's Ears: Story Ideas

Silvermoonlight speaks the truth. Now, you can certainly find a way to make them work (you could take the post-apocalyptic setting of Splatoon and place it solidly after Instrumentality), but you'd have to significantly alter parts of either setting (maybe both) to make the story effective. There's...
by Asuka'sBigBrother
Thu Feb 22, 2018 12:05 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: From Your Lips to the Author's Ears: Story Ideas
Replies: 1911
Views: 153481

Re: From Your Lips to the Author's Ears: Story Ideas

They don't, but it definitely helps. Writing a story is like cooking--you can't throw ingredients together at random, you have to know which ones complement each other. Otherwise you'll be left with a disgusting slop. Any two stories can compliment each other if told the right way. The stories them...
by Asuka'sBigBrother
Thu Feb 22, 2018 12:04 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: Reconciliation
Replies: 3
Views: 182

Re: Reconciliation

C.T.1290#874231 wrote:
And about my writing, I guess that you may be right about maybe being a bit too detailed.

Nope, that's not the issue. The issue is what that detail is spent on. Don't tell us what the characters are thinking. Use sufficient detail that we can infer what the characters think.
by Asuka'sBigBrother
Thu Feb 22, 2018 8:32 am
Forum: Evangelion Chit-Chat
Topic: Does Sadamoto ship Shinji and Asuka?
Replies: 11
Views: 534

Re: Does Sadamoto ship Shinji and Asuka?

The Eva Monkey#874088 wrote:I believe it's been well-established that Sadamoto favors Rei.


Sadamoto is aware who Rei is in relation to Shinji, right?
by Asuka'sBigBrother
Thu Feb 22, 2018 8:21 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: Evangelion 2: A Legacy of Angels
Replies: 22
Views: 1137

Re: Evangelion 2: A Legacy of Angels

I just wanna
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5th chapter is finished(the story is all on page 1). I've also revised chapter one and given minor edits to the chapters in between.

Read.

Give feedback.

Have Cream Soda.
by Asuka'sBigBrother
Thu Feb 22, 2018 6:48 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: From Your Lips to the Author's Ears: Story Ideas
Replies: 1911
Views: 153481

Re: From Your Lips to the Author's Ears: Story Ideas

Ray#874218 wrote:Character development for Ritsuko a mom? Also, where does Rei Asuka and Misato fit in this story?

It's your story, you tell us.
by Asuka'sBigBrother
Thu Feb 22, 2018 4:28 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: From Your Lips to the Author's Ears: Story Ideas
Replies: 1911
Views: 153481

Re: From Your Lips to the Author's Ears: Story Ideas

Tohsa Akagi offers a helluva lot of potential for character development.
by Asuka'sBigBrother
Thu Feb 22, 2018 3:53 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: Reconciliation
Replies: 3
Views: 182

Re: Reconciliation

Some nice scenery but you're telling the reader too much. Don't tell us what Asuka thinks of Shinji, show us by describing her face, thoughts, ect. You spend too much time expositing on what these characters are feeling or thinking rather than showing us what they think or feel with their actions. T...
by Asuka'sBigBrother
Thu Feb 22, 2018 3:46 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: Fanfic Authors' Networking Thread
Replies: 102
Views: 22149

Re: Fanfic Authors' Networking Thread

C.T.1290#873975 wrote:I wrote the first chapter on my very first EVA fanfic on here, but no one has left a review yet. :asuka_sad:

Gotcha fam.
by Asuka'sBigBrother
Thu Feb 22, 2018 3:39 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: From Your Lips to the Author's Ears: Story Ideas
Replies: 1911
Views: 153481

Re: From Your Lips to the Author's Ears: Story Ideas

I don't understand why your freaking out, i just suggested an idea for a fanfic jeez Vux is right. This thread's purpose is to get ideas going, there's no need to get worked up because you find an idea uninteresting. Additionally, there's no story which [i]couldn't[/i[ be good. It all comes down to...

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