My two cents "Who would want to sleep with someone as f*cked up as me?" But am I going too far? This is a valid scenario but you're probably going too far on the path of self-deprecation if you make it all of the in-universe reality. That question is his own self-evaluation. People will no...

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The obvious question is what is this place? What is the megastructure? Only Black Moon can be this huge right?

I was a little late with review this time so I gave a longer one. Oh one thing I missed in it, Mari is lonely and deserves solace too! So it's good for her to find some with Shinji and other with Rei.

Rei II has a copied piece of Yui's soul? How does this work, I thought they couldn't copy souls? Core: Imprint of Makinami M. I./fragment of Lilith's Original Soul Core imprint? Interesting new concept. Core: Ayanami, R./Lilith I thought Rei I had Lilith's soul? So they should be the same th...

Yeah indeed. I guess I was pulling conclusions out of context for the excerpt and it can only be wrong without the full picture. After reading it in full the whole thing is actually logical from his past experience and promising because I foresee a future when he grows and learns to get along with p...

Careful here. Big difference with Shinji's characterization. What I see here is a jaded, cynical, confrontational, destructive, full-blown sarcastic Shinji. NGE!Shinji is passive, approval seeking, good-hearted, clinging. NGE!Shinji's personality is shaped by past abandonment, solitude, lac...

I wouldn't be too worried about inconsistency between 2.0 and 3.0 because the mess has so much left unanswered in the canon and pretty much anything goes at this stage. Either way it wouldn't change things too much.

During a recent rewatch of 2.0 I found some new connections and had this general speculation about Mari's motives (in this fanfic) based on a mix of previous episodes and the canon and this analysis https://forum.evageeks.org/post/411487/Analysis-of-Maris-role-in-Rebuild-lengthy/#411487. I didn't re...

I've read this as a sample before but the new thing this time is the decision to put it immediately after the previous section. This puts things in quite a different perspective. The change of pace is refreshing and fitting to the story. It was quite intense in the last section and now it's slowed d...

There are very few post-Q fics and this is a good one. You've got quite a few interesting subplots developing: - New Angles? Like "Human uncovers 25 new Dead Sea Scrolls in 2016", giant fail for SEELE lol - Mutiny on Wunder - WILLE vs UN - Shinji's place in the world - Asuka's cont...

DarkBluePhoenix#848505 wrote:I'd call it the "Fight Against Giants" but the acronym gets a bit dicey when trying to post it...

True, "F.A.G." would allude to a different Gendo from the one in your fic. (Now, make an omake where Gendo fights with fish.)

I saw Napster (2007) and Google (2010) in chapter 11. It's funny how Google being an usherer of cutting edge AI research IRL, its subsidiary in London just managed to propose a Differentiable Neural Computer that can only solve toy examples and cannot handle real-world problems yet (compared to MAGI...

Ha, I just found out you also have this thread. Here are some comments about difficulties I've had with the draft and some comments about the ships based on what I've read here so far. These are just feedbacks not questions that need answers. Misato no longer knows about Lilith I don't think it&...

Resurgence Arc : The arc where additional angels and enemies appear, mainly the remains of SEELE trying to destroy NERV. It will take place several years after the end 3I. THis arc will culminate in a three part finale, aptly called "End of Evangelion" which, yes, cliche, but totally wort...

Hey guys. . . Ray here, with a question relating to a Fanfic i'm working on. What I'm asking is, how do I characterize an Adult Shinji Ikari Ray, you are hiding quite some gems here and there! I like the few chapters you posted in this thread very much. Getting back to the topic, I pretty much agre...

the reveal that Mari has been around since the time when Yui was alive seems like it would be out of left field How so? Being a PhD student under Fuyutsuki at the age of 16 (as in the Manga), Mari would be highly intelligent but emotionally immature, which is the case as in how she identified herse...

Could it be that she somehow participated on the experiment that blew up the south pole, and she also survived that? I find a similar theory in this fanfic https://forum.evageeks.org/thread/18510/New-FanFic-Neon-Genesis-Evangelion-Legacy/ which plausibly connects the Manga's continuity with Rebuild...

> Mimori Shikinami – August 18, 1975 > Asuka Langley Soryu – December 4, 2001 Asuka Langley Soryu is not getting a new name Asuka Shikinami Langley in this plot, right? If Asuka is getting the Shikinami name I'd be furious. That Mimori b*tch (and the animal Oscar) can even deprive Asuka...

Ray#845941 wrote:I must have rewritten the scene where he gets shot six times

It is a great scene. Your effort pays off.

It's good to hear you're still on it. Take as much time as you will need.