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Chapter 26 up now.
Kaworu has a foreboding dream in the middle of lots of cryptic foreshadowing.
Kaworu has a foreboding dream in the middle of lots of cryptic foreshadowing.
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Chapter 27 up.
If anyone thought Asuka was going to live without Eva this time... you thought wrong.
If anyone thought Asuka was going to live without Eva this time... you thought wrong.
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Huh, forgot to update this one. Chapter 28 up and the story got bumped up to the top of FF.net's Eva section, so it should be easier to find now.
Nothing very important in this chapter, just Rei having fun.
Nothing very important in this chapter, just Rei having fun.
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Public Service Announcement: this story is now available in alternatehistory.com's ASB section.
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Chapter 29 up.
Asuka's officially on the team now.
Asuka's officially on the team now.
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Apologies if this comes out of nowhere (though I have posted some on another of your threads for this fic on a different forum, so, whatever). I really like what you've done with this story. It's not exactly something I can verbalize properly, but... it is quite good, and I very much enjoy it for all the work it seems you've put in. Sorry for not being able to offer much else in the way of critique, tough I will say...
Beyond that, just... keep up the good work.
Spoilering to be on the safe side SPOILER: Show
Yeah, the "Rei is Kaworu's sister" did feel like a teeny little bit of an asspull-- but it was a well-executed asspull with a valid reason behind it, so I'll forgive you on it.
Beyond that, just... keep up the good work.
My ongoing fanfics: NGE: (Not) the End, Evangelion: Regenesis
Winking Mari makes my heart go doki doki
Winking Mari makes my heart go doki doki
We're all Asuka-fanboys? I take great exception to that. It's Mari I want to plow nine ways from Sunday, if you don't mind.
What? She's 28 now.
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Chapter 30 up.
Asuka makes a rather loud statement of opinion about a negative comparison between her breast size and Mari's.
Asuka makes a rather loud statement of opinion about a negative comparison between her breast size and Mari's.
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Chapter 31 up.
Asuka bitches about something, as usual - except this time, she's got a point.
Asuka bitches about something, as usual - except this time, she's got a point.
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Chapter 32 up.
In which Asuka does stupid teenage shit and makes Kaworu sweat in the process.
In which Asuka does stupid teenage shit and makes Kaworu sweat in the process.
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Chapter 33 is up.
In which Asuka suffers the consequences of her actions, but still finds the time to give Kaworu a heart-to-heart.
In which Asuka suffers the consequences of her actions, but still finds the time to give Kaworu a heart-to-heart.
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Huh, I didn't update in November? Chapter 24 was up in November.
In which the women of the Ikari family exercise their connections to certain circles, both legal and illegal.
Also, Chapter 25 went up last night.
In which exposition is had on the Spear of Longinus from an Angel's point of view and Leliel is up to something involving causality.
In which the women of the Ikari family exercise their connections to certain circles, both legal and illegal.
Also, Chapter 25 went up last night.
In which exposition is had on the Spear of Longinus from an Angel's point of view and Leliel is up to something involving causality.
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Will it have the Combine?
"When life gives you problems..., get into the robot!"
"We VUX wanted peace with humans, until they day that insult was thrown"
"Where's you're ogrelord now laddeh?" Drek
"We VUX wanted peace with humans, until they day that insult was thrown"
"Where's you're ogrelord now laddeh?" Drek
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Kinda, but I won't have them overshadow the Angels as far as plot goes.
Mark my words, though: when they do eventually appear, bad things will happen. Not bad by HL standards, bad by Eva standards. I may not write like Anno does, but I do know my roots and the audience will get a grim reminder that despite the more lighthearted beginning, this is still an Evangelion story.
All I'm saying is this: humanity having refused to be enslaved and rendered extinct within a generation? Rolling over and just accepting it would've been the less painful outcome. As racist as some of the Angels are, they generally don't care unless you get in the way. The Combine, on the other hand, don't fuck around when it comes to competition and would merrily steamroll the Angels with minimal effort if the two sides were aware of each other's existence. I'm not bringing the Combine in as regular foes like Angels because the faction as a whole is just way too damn overpowered even by sci-fi standards.
Mark my words, though: when they do eventually appear, bad things will happen. Not bad by HL standards, bad by Eva standards. I may not write like Anno does, but I do know my roots and the audience will get a grim reminder that despite the more lighthearted beginning, this is still an Evangelion story.
All I'm saying is this: humanity having refused to be enslaved and rendered extinct within a generation? Rolling over and just accepting it would've been the less painful outcome. As racist as some of the Angels are, they generally don't care unless you get in the way. The Combine, on the other hand, don't fuck around when it comes to competition and would merrily steamroll the Angels with minimal effort if the two sides were aware of each other's existence. I'm not bringing the Combine in as regular foes like Angels because the faction as a whole is just way too damn overpowered even by sci-fi standards.
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Chapter 36 up.
Asuka is having fun trolling Kaworu but are being watched by two someones.
Asuka is having fun trolling Kaworu but are being watched by two someones.
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Chapter 37 is up.
Yui gives out a lecture while Asuka is watching Youtube during class.
Yui gives out a lecture while Asuka is watching Youtube during class.
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Chapter 38 is up.
Enter the Wonder Twins, also known as Israfel and Sarafiel.
Enter the Wonder Twins, also known as Israfel and Sarafiel.
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Chapter 39 up.
As if the kids didn't have enough on their hands dealing with the twin Angels, Zeruel himself decided to crash the party.
As if the kids didn't have enough on their hands dealing with the twin Angels, Zeruel himself decided to crash the party.
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Chapter 40 up.
In which the kids learn the hard way just how much their popguns and tactics are worth against the Angel of Might. Only Asuka is left standing and only because of a mysterious white Evangelion.
In which the kids learn the hard way just how much their popguns and tactics are worth against the Angel of Might. Only Asuka is left standing and only because of a mysterious white Evangelion.
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Chapter 41 up.
In which everyone involved is trying to catch their breath after what just happened.
In which everyone involved is trying to catch their breath after what just happened.
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Chapter 42 is up.
In which the command staff and the pilots sit down to try to make heads and tails of the previous day's events and Kaworu avoids a Bad End due to Asuka backtalking to people.
In which the command staff and the pilots sit down to try to make heads and tails of the previous day's events and Kaworu avoids a Bad End due to Asuka backtalking to people.
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