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Postby jcmoorehead » Thu Feb 22, 2018 3:54 am

Just quickly bumping this. So I've been writing my Asuka/Kaworu/Shinji fic for a while now and last night I finished and uploaded the first bit of smut for it. I'm planning to do two, the first, which was finished last night is focusing on Asuka and Kaworu's first time doing anything. It's not the most complex of concepts, been together a couple of weeks, both are turned on and decide to do stuff.

Can't post the link but it is on my Ao3 for anyone interested. The second one will be of the three of them but that'll probably come after the fic itself is finished :)

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Postby amitakartok » Thu Feb 22, 2018 5:10 am

Eh. I'll pass.

I don't care it's a threesome, it involves Shinji and Kaworu in the same lemon scene without genderbending. That's automatic disqualification for me. I'm not saying bisexual scenes don't come to my mind every once in a while; in fact, I feel that there's potential for a scene of M/M exploration with F supervision where the POV male character inwardly wonders why would such an innocuous thing be treated as the foulest of taboos when it's surprisingly not at all different from pleasuring a woman, especially with the fact that a guy inherently knows a guy's body better than a girl does. I mean, it's not even all that different from a futa. But people don't bother exploring any of that because they stop thinking beyond "guy gets dominated". That's why I'm not opposed to yaoi per se, but simply can't take it seriously as it is.
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Postby Lt Light Ark » Tue Mar 06, 2018 7:44 pm

View Original Postjcmoorehead wrote:Just quickly bumping this. So I've been writing my Asuka/Kaworu/Shinji fic for a while now and last night I finished and uploaded the first bit of smut for it. I'm planning to do two, the first, which was finished last night is focusing on Asuka and Kaworu's first time doing anything. It's not the most complex of concepts, been together a couple of weeks, both are turned on and decide to do stuff.

Can't post the link but it is on my Ao3 for anyone interested. The second one will be of the three of them but that'll probably come after the fic itself is finished :)


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Postby Iron Kong Manuer » Mon May 07, 2018 5:16 am

Good morning!

Years ago I've read a well-written lemon fanfiction where Misato Shinji (and after Ritsuko) make it after the Jet Alone accident.

Unfortunately I can't remember where I've rode it (AFF, MediaMiner, Lemonstatica or other): so can someone rember or link me this fic?

TY all.

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Postby amitakartok » Sun May 13, 2018 7:04 pm

Something that came to my mind this morning.

Yui/Gendo/Mari threesome, followed by Mari having some off-the-books fun with Shinji (Mari's 19, Shinji's 17). Specifically, the trio have been having fun like this for a while and Shinji knew, but decided it wasn't his business (even though he often overheard it). Except Mari decided to bag him too and Yui, upon finding out, basically went "oh, okay, he sorely needed to get laid at his age but isn't the type to chase girls, so do me a favor and have fun with him, will you?"
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Postby Iron Kong Manuer » Thu May 24, 2018 4:46 am

View Original PostIron Kong Manuer wrote:Good morning!

Years ago I've read a well-written lemon fanfiction where Misato Shinji (and after Ritsuko) make it after the Jet Alone accident.

Unfortunately I can't remember where I've rode it (AFF, MediaMiner, Lemonstatica or other): so can someone rember or link me this fic?

TY all.


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Postby Ambiant23 » Thu May 24, 2018 7:31 am

I got a good one: Instead of the JSDF soldiers killing everyone in end of Evangelion. They force the entire main cast to enact in the plot of italian "art" fiilm SALO'. :urk:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sal%C3%B2,_or_the_120_Days_of_Sodom

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Postby amitakartok » Mon Jun 11, 2018 6:00 pm

Considering how much AO3 seems to like Kawoshin, do you guys think they'd have trouble with genderbent Kawoshin?

Specifically, a college-aged girl!Shinji being in a secret sexual relationship with Kaworu, who's attending the same college as her. The catch is that Kaworu is the crown prince and as such, if it came out that he was boning her, it would reflect badly on both of them: Shinji would be branded a gold digger/celebrity whore by tabloids while Kaworu would catch hot water from the royal family for keeping a concubine instead of focusing on his studies and thus, his duties and responsibilities as heir (he's in college studying economics in preparation for taking the throne down the line).

They can't help it, though. Because Shinji having fallen for a bishie is one thing, but it turns out said bishie has a thing for plain girls and Shinji is about as plain-looking as one can get (though she can be attractive whenever she's properly motivated to clean up, which is the kind of "hidden flower" beauty that got Kaworu's attention in the first place).
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Postby Iron Kong Manuer » Tue Jun 12, 2018 5:00 am

View Original PostIron Kong Manuer wrote:Good morning!

Years ago I've read a well-written lemon fanfiction where Misato Shinji (and after Ritsuko) make it after the Jet Alone accident.

Unfortunately I can't remember where I've rode it (AFF, MediaMiner, Lemonstatica or other): so can someone rember or link me this fic?

TY all.


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Postby amitakartok » Fri Jun 22, 2018 2:02 pm

Dudes and dudettes... did no one here notice that RE-TAKE just got a goddamn sequel in the last Comiket?!
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Postby Ambiant23 » Fri Jun 22, 2018 2:11 pm

Retake got a sequel why hasn't anyone been talking about it

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Postby amitakartok » Fri Jun 22, 2018 3:08 pm

Probably because there's only a short sex scene and the episode ends with Asuka getting messily snuffed right next to Shinji by a piece of debris courtesy of Sachiel, followed by Toji and Kensuke suffering the same fate offscreen.

It does, however, have Eyepatch Shinji.
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Postby Blockio » Fri Jun 22, 2018 3:42 pm

View Original Postamitakartok wrote:Probably because there's only a short sex scene and the episode ends with Asuka getting messily snuffed right next to Shinji by a piece of debris courtesy of Sachiel, followed by Toji and Kensuke suffering the same fate offscreen.

It does, however, have Eyepatch Shinji.

I mean, Re:Take is overrated to begin with if you ask me... and there isnt really anything meaningful to add to it... so a forced sequel will be about as good as you'd expect a forced sequel to a followup-fanfic for something that didn't really need a followup.

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Postby silvermoonlight » Fri Jun 22, 2018 4:47 pm

View Original PostAmbiant23 wrote:Retake got a sequel why hasn't anyone been talking about it


I didn't even know about this and it gives me really awful mixed feelings....like retake is okay but I never felt that it needed a sequel.
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