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Postby amitakartok » Thu Mar 24, 2016 7:36 pm

Chapter 26 up now.

Kaworu has a foreboding dream in the middle of lots of cryptic foreshadowing.
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Postby amitakartok » Tue Apr 12, 2016 9:06 pm

Chapter 27 up.

If anyone thought Asuka was going to live without Eva this time... you thought wrong. :asuka_thumbsup:
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Postby amitakartok » Sat Jun 25, 2016 5:50 pm

Huh, forgot to update this one. Chapter 28 up and the story got bumped up to the top of FF.net's Eva section, so it should be easier to find now.

Nothing very important in this chapter, just Rei having fun.
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Postby amitakartok » Sun Aug 07, 2016 7:26 pm

Public Service Announcement: this story is now available in alternatehistory.com's ASB section.
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Postby amitakartok » Thu Aug 11, 2016 9:30 pm

Chapter 29 up.

Asuka's officially on the team now.
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Postby Fyrstorm » Mon Sep 12, 2016 3:31 am

Apologies if this comes out of nowhere (though I have posted some on another of your threads for this fic on a different forum, so, whatever). I really like what you've done with this story. It's not exactly something I can verbalize properly, but... it is quite good, and I very much enjoy it for all the work it seems you've put in. Sorry for not being able to offer much else in the way of critique, tough I will say...
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Postby amitakartok » Wed Sep 21, 2016 6:55 pm

Chapter 30 up.

Asuka makes a rather loud statement of opinion about a negative comparison between her breast size and Mari's.
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Postby amitakartok » Mon Oct 31, 2016 10:20 pm

Chapter 31 up.

Asuka bitches about something, as usual - except this time, she's got a point.
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Postby amitakartok » Mon Feb 27, 2017 5:53 pm

Chapter 32 up.

In which Asuka does stupid teenage shit and makes Kaworu sweat in the process.
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Postby amitakartok » Wed Sep 27, 2017 12:02 pm

Chapter 33 is up.

In which Asuka suffers the consequences of her actions, but still finds the time to give Kaworu a heart-to-heart.
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Postby amitakartok » Mon Feb 19, 2018 9:11 am

Huh, I didn't update in November? Chapter 24 was up in November.

In which the women of the Ikari family exercise their connections to certain circles, both legal and illegal.

Also, Chapter 25 went up last night.

In which exposition is had on the Spear of Longinus from an Angel's point of view and Leliel is up to something involving causality.
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Postby VUX » Thu Mar 01, 2018 1:50 pm

Will it have the Combine?
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Postby amitakartok » Thu Mar 01, 2018 2:26 pm

Kinda, but I won't have them overshadow the Angels as far as plot goes.

Mark my words, though: when they do eventually appear, bad things will happen. Not bad by HL standards, bad by Eva standards. I may not write like Anno does, but I do know my roots and the audience will get a grim reminder that despite the more lighthearted beginning, this is still an Evangelion story.

All I'm saying is this: humanity having refused to be enslaved and rendered extinct within a generation? Rolling over and just accepting it would've been the less painful outcome. As racist as some of the Angels are, they generally don't care unless you get in the way. The Combine, on the other hand, don't fuck around when it comes to competition and would merrily steamroll the Angels with minimal effort if the two sides were aware of each other's existence. I'm not bringing the Combine in as regular foes like Angels because the faction as a whole is just way too damn overpowered even by sci-fi standards.
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Postby amitakartok » Thu May 10, 2018 7:04 pm

Chapter 36 up.

Asuka is having fun trolling Kaworu but are being watched by two someones.
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Postby amitakartok » Thu Jul 19, 2018 7:06 pm

Chapter 37 is up.

Yui gives out a lecture while Asuka is watching Youtube during class.
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