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Postby Mainblag » Sat Oct 07, 2017 11:32 am

View Original Postamitakartok wrote:Could work, but smells like bad wish fulfillment because how dare an unattractive geek have a bombshell of a girlfriend.

Yeah, it could smell like that -- "how DARE" and all that -- but it could probably work to at least the degree of close friendship. And Kensuke? Unattractive? He's adorkable, let's be real here.
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Postby Sachi » Sat Oct 07, 2017 12:06 pm

Isn't all shipping wish fulfillment? Why stop here? I'll judge you just the same as I do the Asuka/Shinji shippers. :tongue:
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Postby Snow » Sat Oct 07, 2017 12:28 pm

View Original PostSachi wrote:Isn't all shipping wish fulfillment? Why stop here? I'll judge you just the same as I do the Asuka/Shinji shippers. :tongue:


Yes, yet some wishes are more realistic than others.
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Postby Guy Nacks » Sat Oct 07, 2017 1:54 pm

View Original PostMainblag wrote:[Kensuke's] adorkable, let's be real here.


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Postby amitakartok » Sat Oct 07, 2017 6:56 pm

View Original PostSachi wrote:Isn't all shipping wish fulfillment?


Only if you wish you were either of the characters involved.
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Postby Sachi » Sat Oct 07, 2017 6:58 pm

So, I can bypass this with Kensuke and Mari by not self-inserting, yes?
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Postby Mainblag » Sat Oct 07, 2017 10:50 pm

View Original PostSachi wrote:So, I can bypass this with Kensuke and Mari by not self-inserting, yes?

<gendovoice> Correct. </gendovoice>
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Postby amitakartok » Sun Oct 08, 2017 7:30 am

View Original PostSachi wrote:So, I can bypass this with Kensuke and Mari by not self-inserting, yes?


Never self-insert. Ever.

That way lies madness.
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Postby silvermoonlight » Sun Oct 08, 2017 3:04 pm

View Original Postamitakartok wrote:Never self-insert. Ever.

That way lies madness.


Though I think every author inserts a piece of them self in to there work through the characters I do agree that full self inserting is bad mostly because the reader can tell your doing it because the character just feels really off in a big way like there just not themselves. I don't think there's anything wrong with pairing wish fulfilment stories as really I enjoy reading where people go with there ideas. ^_^
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Postby shinji69 » Sun Oct 08, 2017 10:58 pm

Know any good NTR ff with Asuka cheating on Shinji?

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Postby Cybermat47 » Mon Oct 09, 2017 2:31 am

View Original Postamitakartok wrote:Never self-insert. Ever.

That way lies madness.


Hideaki Anno has said that Shinji is something of a self-insert IIRC.

In light of that, I would say that you're right.
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Postby ChaddyManPrime » Mon Oct 09, 2017 3:10 am

View Original Postshinji69 wrote:Know any good NTR ff with Asuka cheating on Shinji?


Speaking of which

Asuka would be so much more NTRable than Shinji, Shinji didn't give a fuck about her till she was dead, and even then his anguish could have been over his fap material being destroyed.

Yet Asuka was all like "why are you here, you won't help me, blah blah blah"

Someone should write a fic where Shinji's coping mechanism becomes sex after he becomes a pilot and decides to use his celebrity status to fuck women.

NTR the hell out of Asuka.
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Postby Mainblag » Mon Oct 09, 2017 11:27 am

View Original PostChaddyManPrime wrote:Speaking of which

Asuka would be so much more NTRable than Shinji, Shinji didn't give a fuck about her till she was dead, and even then his anguish could have been over his fap material being destroyed.

Yet Asuka was all like "why are you here, you won't help me, blah blah blah"

Someone should write a fic where Shinji's coping mechanism becomes sex after he becomes a pilot and decides to use his celebrity status to fuck women.

NTR the hell out of Asuka.



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Postby amitakartok » Mon Oct 09, 2017 11:45 am

No detailed sexual acts there so... I think it does, actually.
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Postby Sachi » Mon Oct 09, 2017 2:05 pm

That's acceptable. In the future, any concerns about the content in this thread should be PM'd directly to staff. No need for backseat moderation. The nature of this thread is somewhat risque to begin with. We just ask that explicit details be left out.
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Postby Mainblag » Mon Oct 09, 2017 3:18 pm

View Original PostSachi wrote:That's acceptable. In the future, any concerns about the content in this thread should be PM'd directly to staff. No need for backseat moderation. The nature of this thread is somewhat risque to begin with. We just ask that explicit details be left out.

Right. Got it. Apologies.
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Postby amitakartok » Mon Oct 16, 2017 10:11 am

Would it be immoral of Asuka to react to Mayumi finding out that she's a futa by taking advantage of the other girl's shy nature to bully her into oral sex so that Asuka will have blackmail material over her to ensure her silence?

Except Mayumi doesn't actually mind because a mutual embarrassing secret makes her feel a sort of kinship with a much prettier and more popular girl. That is, Asuka doesn't do that stuff with anyone else, so Mayumi feels kinda honored that Asuka seemingly lowers herself to associating with her, hence why she keeps calling Asuka sempai despite being the same age.
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Postby silvermoonlight » Mon Oct 16, 2017 11:55 am

View Original Postamitakartok wrote:Would it be immoral of Asuka to react to Mayumi finding out that she's a futa by taking advantage of the other girl's shy nature to bully her into oral sex so that Asuka will have blackmail material over her to ensure her silence?

Except Mayumi doesn't actually mind because a mutual embarrassing secret makes her feel a sort of kinship with a much prettier and more popular girl. That is, Asuka doesn't do that stuff with anyone else, so Mayumi feels kinda honored that Asuka seemingly lowers herself to associating with her, hence why she keeps calling Asuka sempai despite being the same age.


I would go with not bullying because even though Asuka can be kind of an asshole and bully people sexual bullying can be persevered as a whole other level of wrong and not good considering what's going on in the world right now (Nudge nudge, Hollywood) but have it be more about Asuka being curious of her own sexuality and willingness to explore it and Mayumi reasons being the same so its more an act of consenting casual sex.
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Postby amitakartok » Mon Oct 16, 2017 12:36 pm

It's not the malicious kind of bullying I was thinking about. Asuka is hiding the fact that she's a futa, Mayumi walks in on Asuka changing after swimming class and sees too much, so Asuka intimidates the other girl into going down on her so that if Mayumi were to try to publicly reveal Asuka's condition, Asuka can turn that right back around by publicly revealing that Mayumi went down on her and accusing her of being a sick pervert.

Asuka isn't malicious, she's deathly scared of being shamed and ridiculed for her condition and is willing to resort to extreme measures to preempt that. It would take Mayumi's admission of not actually minding the whole thing for Asuka to realize that she has nothing to fear as far as Mayumi is concerned and calm down, after which they'd talk things over and eventually start experimenting.

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There would be a big scare when they go all the way for the first time because Mayumi would only realize afterward that it's an unsafe day for her and Asuka never worked up the courage to go to a doctor and have her manly juices checked for fertility, hence both girls would spend the next month or so deathly scared that Mayumi might've gotten knocked up (she didn't because Asuka is indeed infertile that way for environmental temperature reasons).
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