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Postby silvermoonlight » Mon May 15, 2017 5:43 am

Really enjoyed this chapter and your description of Adam ^_^

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Postby jcmoorehead » Mon May 15, 2017 5:44 am

As mentioned on FFN that was a wonderful chapter, really enjoyed it and I loved seeing that bit of background given for the event.

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Postby Fyrstorm » Tue Jun 13, 2017 1:06 am

Update on NtE: Chapter 039 is taking a lot longer than expected, and I'm not super happy with it. As such, I've been taking a bit of a break from NtE, and figuring out what to do. I'm currently considering just scrapping the current draft, and pulling the concept for Chapter 040 up in its place. I don't know.
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Postby Fyrstorm » Sun Jul 09, 2017 11:46 pm

So, chapter 039b (aka the rewrite I'd talked about) is about 2/3rds done at this point. Despite it taking me more than a month, it's... probably not gonna pass 2000 words, but that's just how it's gonna have to be. I don't think I'll be able to get it further than that. I can promise, however, that Chapter 040 will be something pretty darn cool.

In the meantime, a sneak peek to tide you guys over.

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Something went wumph above him.

Slowly, Shinji looked up, at the multitude of leaves and branches.

~...What was--~

Crack!

Before he could finish the thought, a branch snapped, and something dark and hemispherical fell to the ground beside him. A helmet.

Shinji's eyes widened, as the boy scrambled to get out from under the tree. More branches cracked, and he swore he could hear… grunting from within the tangle of leaves.

“... Ugh, there went my-- gah!”

That was when Mari dropped through the canopy, jolting to a stop midair right where Shinji had been. Four long cables ran out of a pack strapped to her back, leaving her hanging above the ground helplessly.

“O-oh…” she chuckled, a sheepish look on her face. “... Hello, Shinji. Hope you don't mind me… ah… dropping in. Parachute kinda crapped out on me.”
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Postby Fyrstorm » Wed Aug 02, 2017 5:05 am

Hey, guess who's finally posted a new chapter of this thing?

I'll be honest, I really couldn't care less about the quality or length of this latest one-- it's transitional, and I can always go and write a better version later. For now, it'll stay face-paced, short, and kinda sloppily thrown together.

But Chapter 040 will be much better.
My ongoing fanfics: NGE: (Not) the End, Evangelion: Regenesis

Winking Mari makes my heart go doki doki
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What? She's 28 now.

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Postby jcmoorehead » Wed Aug 02, 2017 5:11 am

View Original PostFyrstorm wrote:Hey, guess who's finally posted a new chapter of this thing?

I'll be honest, I really couldn't care less about the quality or length of this latest one-- it's transitional, and I can always go and write a better version later. For now, it'll stay face-paced, short, and kinda sloppily thrown together.

But Chapter 040 will be much better.


Read and reviewed, I liked it. It was transitional as you mentioned but you need that sometimes in a fic and you still managed to do a good job with it. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter though :)

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Postby Fyrstorm » Sun Aug 27, 2017 6:06 pm

So, I've been trying to keep up the work on chapter forty of Not the End, but... well, I'm kinda stuck. I've got most of the major plot points and fights after this planned out, but the minor stuff, and a lot of stuff around this part is just kind of fizzling out. I have bits and pieces of this chapter's scenes set out and everything, but finishing and connecting them is a big issue right now.

Now, it's not like I'm stressed or super busy or anything-- there's just this big gap between when I was last on a roll, and when in the story I know I'll be able to get on a roll again, kinda. Things are also just turning out... unsatisfactory as I'm trying to work on them.

Right now, I think my best solution may just be to put NtE on hiatus for a while, and work on something else. I do have a lot of ideas about other stories, after all. Do you guys have any thoughts?
My ongoing fanfics: NGE: (Not) the End, Evangelion: Regenesis

Winking Mari makes my heart go doki doki
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What? She's 28 now.

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Postby Fyrstorm » Fri Oct 06, 2017 3:34 pm

Okay, I realise it's been a long time since I've posted in here, and it's probably disappointing to see that it's not about a new chapter being published... But hear me out. I think I've figured out what I can do here.

The current, unfinished draft of Chapter 040 is over 4000 words at this point. When finished, it'll probably be longer. My plan is to actually split the chapter in two, so as to be able to actually finish both parts faster (that is, I'll be able to have the "next chapter" finished a lot sooner than if I was starting from scratch like normal).

Should be worth a shot, don't you think?
My ongoing fanfics: NGE: (Not) the End, Evangelion: Regenesis

Winking Mari makes my heart go doki doki
We're all Asuka-fanboys? I take great exception to that. It's Mari I want to plow nine ways from Sunday, if you don't mind.

What? She's 28 now.

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Postby silvermoonlight » Fri Oct 06, 2017 3:43 pm

View Original PostFyrstorm wrote:Okay, I realise it's been a long time since I've posted in here, and it's probably disappointing to see that it's not about a new chapter being published... But hear me out. I think I've figured out what I can do here.

The current, unfinished draft of Chapter 040 is over 4000 words at this point. When finished, it'll probably be longer. My plan is to actually split the chapter in two, so as to be able to actually finish both parts faster (that is, I'll be able to have the "next chapter" finished a lot sooner than if I was starting from scratch like normal).

Should be worth a shot, don't you think?


Go for it I look forward to the next update ^_^
Anywhere can be paradise as long as you have the will to live. After all, you are alive, so you will always have the chance to be happy.

My Eva fanfiction ff.net Fading In To The Stolen Light For download version please go to AO3


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