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Postby silvermoonlight » Sat May 20, 2017 6:57 am

This was deeply moving and awesome. :w00t:

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Postby DarkBluePhoenix » Thu May 25, 2017 1:44 pm

The most recent chapter, chapter 26 if memory serves, was wonderful, with a well choreographed battle on three fronts at the forefront! Looking forward to what's coming next!
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Postby jcmoorehead » Thu Jun 01, 2017 5:31 am

Chapter 27 has now been uploaded for you all ^_^

Had a bit of a struggle with some of the dialogue in this chapter. Kinda feel I managed to get it right but I'm not 100% happy with it. It's only one particular scene I wasn't happy with but I decided it best to get it uploaded as it had already been rewritten twice, going further would only stress me out about it more.

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Postby silvermoonlight » Thu Jun 01, 2017 7:47 am

Deeply moving chapter I really enjoyed it ^_^

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This person appearing again has left me with so many questions though...
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Postby jcmoorehead » Wed Jun 14, 2017 10:36 am

And that's Chapter 28 now online, as we're moving into the final few chapters I wanted to give it a name to reflect that. With musical references being a big part of my fic and also there being musical references in 3.0+1.0s name I wanted to reflect that too so I went for a pretentious prog rock sounding name for this section :tongue:

You Must (Not) Run Away [The Tower Suite - Prelude: Welcome Home]

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Postby silvermoonlight » Wed Jun 14, 2017 12:39 pm

Very nice chapter I really enjoyed it.

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Postby jcmoorehead » Thu Jul 06, 2017 5:19 pm

Chapter 29 has now finally been uploaded ^_^

You Must (Not) Run Away [The Tower Suite - 01: The Damage]

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Postby silvermoonlight » Fri Jul 07, 2017 6:07 am

On this was such a punch to the feelings I felt so bad for Shinji and Asuka as the both had to deal with closure on certain issues which I won't spoil.

Oh yes and then you have this hilarious thing with Ristuko/Maya which had me laughing my head off. :hitthetable:

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Postby jcmoorehead » Thu Jul 20, 2017 5:28 pm

You Must (Not) Run Away [The Tower Suite - 02: Together We Stand...]

And that makes chapter 30, being honest I never expected this fic to be this long. I originally planned to wrap it up at about 25 chapters or so but certain parts took longer to get to than I intended but I think it's made it a much stronger story.

Chapter 31 has already been written and just needs some final editing for the last scene. Originally 30 and 31 were one chapter but it got to about 12,000 words and still wasn't finished so I felt it was best to split it into two. I think it works out much better.

So I do have to ask, I don't know if anyone does actually follow this on here but at people enjoying the story so far? I'm anticipating maybe 3 more chapters before we reach the conclusion.

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Postby Fyrstorm » Thu Jul 20, 2017 9:53 pm

Well, I'm certainly enjoying it. May have to reread the latest couple of chapters again, but everything's looking really good right now!
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Postby silvermoonlight » Fri Jul 21, 2017 4:50 am

Really heartfelt chapter, personally I'm going to miss this story when its over but I'm concerned about whats going to happen at the end and how far Gendo will go.

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Postby jcmoorehead » Fri Jul 21, 2017 7:37 am

View Original PostFyrstorm wrote:Well, I'm certainly enjoying it. May have to reread the latest couple of chapters again, but everything's looking really good right now!


Thank you! Means a lot coming from you considering how much I love your works :)

Really heartfelt chapter, personally I'm going to miss this story when its over but I'm concerned about whats going to happen at the end and how far Gendo will go.


I'm glad you thought so, I think the Mari/Asuka discussion has been one of my favourite things to write so far across the entire fic. Felt genuine emotion whilst writing it.


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