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Postby ChaddyManPrime » Thu Apr 06, 2017 4:09 am

Rommel, what are you looking for exactly Good Sir? are you just trying to spread out your work as much as you can, or are you looking for some sort of feedback that you haven't received yet? Your work is already on Fanbard's, Media Miner (I think it's under the Ranka name though), Adult fanfiction, and AO3. Jimmy, Gerasa, Ark, Nemo, and I all really like your work, you've come a long way since the old version of Genocide . You can prose like nobody's business, your attention to detail is splendid.
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Postby Rommel » Thu Apr 06, 2017 9:09 am

Spreading it out. FFN seems a logical place, but they have always appeared to be more strict with their lemon policy (or their ban thereof) yet that seems to not be the case. So, if there's a likelihood it won't be taken down, then it might as well get posted. Fanbards is ... well, not exactly user friendly and not exactly thriving, and AO3 only has a fraction of the readership. On top of that, AFF appears dead as a doorknob. So, basically, I'm looking to see where else things can be posted.

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Postby ChaddyManPrime » Thu Apr 06, 2017 9:19 am

Oh okay bro, I was just concerned that you thought your contributions were unappreciated.
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Postby amitakartok » Mon May 15, 2017 8:53 am

...is it weird that I got a vanilla lemon idea from reading NTR?
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Postby ChaddyManPrime » Mon May 15, 2017 2:00 pm

Nah, I get ideas from opposing genre's all the time.
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Postby amitakartok » Wed May 17, 2017 8:04 am

Good to know.

By the way, the idea involves Mana wanting to maximize the memorable-ness of her and Shinji's wedding by way of picking an unsafe day for the wedding and having unprotected sex with him 15 minutes before they're due at the altar. Naughty girl, that Mana.
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Postby ChaddyManPrime » Wed May 17, 2017 4:55 pm

I'm not really a fan of the oc's created in the video games so I would most likely not read it, but I imagine there would be an audience for it.
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Postby jcmoorehead » Wed May 17, 2017 5:06 pm

Not sure if we're allowed to post links in here but I just put a new lemon up on my AO3. Fairly vanilla stuff I suppose, quite WAFFy but detailing a night Asuka and Shinji spend together after the events of chapter 15 in You Must (Not) Run Away (You don't need to have read it, don't worry). Asuka has the opportunity to try something with Shinji she has been wanting to for some time.

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Postby amitakartok » Wed May 17, 2017 5:41 pm

View Original PostChaddyManPrime wrote:I'm not really a fan of the oc's created in the video games so I would most likely not read it, but I imagine there would be an audience for it.


Even if I wouldn't be a big Mana fanboy, I wouldn't have much choice in the matter, considering that Shinji/Asuka is not really an option.
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Postby ChaddyManPrime » Wed May 17, 2017 7:06 pm

I don't enjoy your blasphemous shenanigans Good Sir, sounds like devil talk to me :bat:
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Postby amitakartok » Thu May 18, 2017 11:30 am

...I don't get it.
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Postby Kendrix » Sat May 20, 2017 9:48 pm

Three words: Shini Ikari Making Project, in which Gendo is a super attentive sub or possibly a service top.
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Postby ChaddyManPrime » Sun May 21, 2017 1:53 pm

Meh, I can believe that Gendo would willingly let Yui peg him.
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Postby Kendrix » Sun May 21, 2017 8:01 pm

View Original PostChaddyManPrime wrote:Meh, I can believe that Gendo would willingly let Yui peg him.


He'd let her do anything rly. That's the point.
It's not a good thing that he is so obsessed with that woman but it has plenty of untapped porn potential. Just sayin.
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Postby ChaddyManPrime » Mon May 22, 2017 12:02 am

View Original PostKendrix wrote:He'd let her do anything rly. That's the point.
It's not a good thing that he is so obsessed with that woman but it has plenty of untapped porn potential. Just sayin.


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Postby amitakartok » Mon May 29, 2017 7:58 am

In the context of a modified version of my above Shinji/Mana idea... how touchy should a freshly-married Japanese couple realistically be to the idea of desecrating a place of worship with carnal acts, thus potentially invoking the wrath of said place of worship's kami and consequentially cursing their marriage with misfortune?
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Postby jcmoorehead » Sun Jul 16, 2017 4:59 pm

So again I won't link it but posted another fic to my AO3. Kinda had the idea some time ago about Asuka and Shinji talking about fantasies and Shinji mentioning he kinda likes the idea of doing things in public. Sort of the risk of being caught and that type of thing. So I wrote a fic with three different scenes of them out in different places. It's one I had been meaning to write for quite some time and I had a lot of fun writing it ^_^

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Postby ChaddyManPrime » Sun Jul 16, 2017 10:36 pm

Meant to tell you that I read it yesterday you did another great job James.
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Postby Rommel » Mon Jul 24, 2017 11:12 am

I read that recently. Very nice. Specially liked the second scene. Only thing I can suggest would be Asuka being more active with her mouth, lol. Very good job.

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Postby amitakartok » Fri Aug 04, 2017 5:35 am

Considering some of the more... extreme fetishes of some people in this thread... would there be interest in a cuckold story?
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