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Postby ChaddyManPrime » Sun Feb 12, 2017 7:16 pm

I think they're asexual but Kaworu would be willing to fuck Shinji or vice versa if it made Shinji happy
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Postby Guy Nacks » Sun Feb 12, 2017 7:19 pm

View Original PostChaddyManPrime wrote:I think they're asexual but Kaworu would be willing to fuck Shinji or vice versa if it made Shinji happy



Then, if that's the case, he'd probably be willing to entertain Asuka's desires as well if her and Shinji's roles were switched. Problem solved.
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Postby ChaddyManPrime » Sun Feb 12, 2017 7:23 pm

If Asuka was Shinji sure
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Postby Glor » Sun Feb 12, 2017 8:39 pm

I don't understand the fanon assumption that Kaworu, not matter what, has to have some kind of fixation on Shinji.

Why?
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Postby Guy Nacks » Sun Feb 12, 2017 9:07 pm

View Original PostGlor wrote:I don't understand the fanon assumption that Kaworu, not matter what, has to have some kind of fixation on Shinji.

Why?


Because of this, primarily.
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Postby Glor » Sun Feb 12, 2017 10:21 pm



Right, so because he proclaims strong feelings for Shinji once, an obsession is solidified in every multiverse? Fanwank at its finest. I guess it's no weirder than people deciding AxS is the absolute law of the universe.

More on topic, I think your fic pitch holds some merrit Guy Nacks. This is worthy of my empathy.
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Postby ChaddyManPrime » Mon Feb 13, 2017 12:21 am

^
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Postby amitakartok » Mon Feb 13, 2017 2:03 pm

He didn't. It was everyone else who read too much into it.
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Postby AngelNo13Bardiel » Mon Feb 13, 2017 2:19 pm

^ Isn't that kind of, y'know, what we do, when you get right down to it? The over-analyzing thing? :tongue:

View Original PostGuy Nacks wrote:-insert other really long summary here-


...again, I can't really argue with what you've got here. It at least sounds more plausible than most oddball ships I've seen folks try. And it would be neat to see someone make it work and in a way that makes sense.

Yeah, you read that correct: I minor in A/K. Hey, if I can't get my A/S, it's the runner-up choice for Asuka-based pairing in NGE (not Rebuild, the existence of AsuMari being a likelihood prevents me from saying otherwise).

View Original PostNemZ wrote:Guys, instead of writing these giant TL:DR posts about hypothetical fics... maybe just write the damn things?


Time, motivation, questioning if it's really what the readers want, etc. There's a lot of factors, really.

I kid, though. I'm all but done with Where Boys Fear to Tread (the working title of the one I mentioned last page...and no, that title doesn't mean anything lesbian-related) and it should be up by tomorrow.
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Postby ChaddyManPrime » Mon Feb 13, 2017 2:50 pm

View Original Postamitakartok wrote:He didn't. It was everyone else who read too much into it.

He forced the issue with an epilogue to an already great film, he shouldn't have ended it on the two of them. As I said, he started it, he shouldn't have did what he did.
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Postby Bagheera » Mon Feb 13, 2017 4:46 pm

Guy Nacks: I really like that pitch. You should write it! There's probably more of an audience for that sort of story than most of us think.
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Postby Reichu » Mon Feb 13, 2017 7:16 pm

In case it wasn't clear, NemZ was trying to poke this thread back away from long, explicit break-downs of the planned lemons. If you don't think you can discuss your ideas and hash out whether or not they're worth writing in full without describing specifics in greater detail than can be found in some actual erotic fiction, you probably need to take the discussion somewhere else. (But humans can be extremely creative under limitations, so I suspect the problem here is unwillingness rather than inability.)

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Postby AngelNo13Bardiel » Tue Feb 14, 2017 3:42 am

As I mentioned above, new lemon's up for all to read, so go on and have a look. It's a little basic but still gets the job done.
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Postby xanderkh » Wed Mar 15, 2017 11:25 am

Guy Nacks: This may be a HUGELY late reply, but I say go for writing your AU dude. I'm really interested in AUs that show different possibilities for the EVA characters, especially your Asuka/Kaworu story.

And while I'm really a stickler for Asuka/Shinji shipping stories, I am open to the different tales that do the romance aspect of Eva really well. Take for example WRECKAGE by Norsehound, an AU where both Kyoko and Yui are alive, but that doesn't mean that things are better for Shinji and Asuka, in fact, it may be worse off. And while the story shows hints of Asuka and Shinji liking each other, the primary couple in this story is Shinji and Hikari, which I think are adorable together. :3

So go for it dude, we'd love to read your AUs. :)
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Postby Guy Nacks » Sun Mar 19, 2017 12:27 am

If I write this thing, don't expect it to be completed in the near future.

I'm not planning on it being the length of, say, a typical Rommel fic, but I haven't written any sort of lengthy fiction from start to finish in about 5 years...and that was a screenplay, not a short story (let alone a fanfic, which I've never been too keen on writing personally).

Right now I'm just brainstorming and outlining potential scenes. I'm also debating whether or not I should include Shinji at all or just shelve him entirely until the denouement because I had a random thought about potentially integrating him into the plot, though not as the main focus, obviously.

My main problem is trying to make it seem as hypothetically canon as possible, so I'm probably going to screen a few episodes and read portions of the manga again for research...because I haven't really done either in years.
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Postby Rommel » Wed Apr 05, 2017 1:30 pm

Hey guys, I have seriously been thinking of putting some lemons up on FFN but I know they are picky. Anyone got any experiences like them taking down stuff or banning accounts?

Now, i was planning 6 Days and Room Service so nothing too extreme. Obviously not PP, as I am pretty sure that would be deleted.

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Postby silvermoonlight » Wed Apr 05, 2017 2:05 pm

View Original PostRommel wrote:Hey guys, I have seriously been thinking of putting some lemons up on FFN but I know they are picky. Anyone got any experiences like them taking down stuff or banning accounts?

Now, i was planning 6 Days and Room Service so nothing too extreme. Obviously not PP, as I am pretty sure that would be deleted.


FFN does allow full sex scenes with in stories but the story must be M rated and not T and one shot fan fictions with with rape and sexual assault are not allowed and will result in the story being pulled with no acceptations to the rules. Achieve of our own has much leaner rules and is a better place to post lemons. ^_^
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Postby Bagheera » Wed Apr 05, 2017 2:54 pm

View Original PostRommel wrote:Hey guys, I have seriously been thinking of putting some lemons up on FFN but I know they are picky. Anyone got any experiences like them taking down stuff or banning accounts?

Now, i was planning 6 Days and Room Service so nothing too extreme. Obviously not PP, as I am pretty sure that would be deleted.


Going by the precedent I've seen on FFN both Six Days and Room Service would be fine so long as they were rated M and had the appropriate disclaimers. PP . . . yeah, probably not.
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Postby jcmoorehead » Wed Apr 05, 2017 3:17 pm

I don't think I'd risk posting any of my lemon's over there but AngelNo13Bardiel posts their stuff over there and has been fine so I imagine in most cases it'd be alright. I actually haven't read Room Service yet, will have to get around to their when/if you do post it there :tongue:

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Postby Bagheera » Wed Apr 05, 2017 4:00 pm

It's up at AO3 if you want to read it there.
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