The Creative Principle
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Plane tickets are only 200 bucks, coming from Florida at least. I'll pick you up, Brer.
Amarantos - an NGE AU, beginning with Asuka, Shinji, and a garden. Take a look. Couldn't hurt.
"Anything can be Evangelion related if you have the will to twist it." -Joseki.
"Anything can be Evangelion related if you have the will to twist it." -Joseki.
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I keep my promises. I'll have time to write after this Friday. Real life has been getting in the way to say the least this month.
But the Devil always gives his due.
But the Devil always gives his due.
The Creative Principle: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11251079/1/The-Creative-Principle
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Yeah I hate to say it but this fic is pretty much dead.
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Don't you quit on me, brer. DON'T YOU QUIT.
Amarantos - an NGE AU, beginning with Asuka, Shinji, and a garden. Take a look. Couldn't hurt.
"Anything can be Evangelion related if you have the will to twist it." -Joseki.
"Anything can be Evangelion related if you have the will to twist it." -Joseki.
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It ain't dead I'm just lazy.
Expect something out soonish.
Expect something out soonish.
The Creative Principle: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11251079/1/The-Creative-Principle
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I would've had something out by now but I forgot the text file on my main computer when I went home for Christmas. So that's why I couldn't work on it.
The Creative Principle: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11251079/1/The-Creative-Principle
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Please update soon. . . I want to see where you take this so badly it hurts.
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You're the boss.
CHAPTER 7: LE BONHOMME SEPT HEURES
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11251079/7 ... -Principle
The Creative Principle: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11251079/1/The-Creative-Principle
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Folk Devil is at his keyboard, All's right with the world.
Amarantos - an NGE AU, beginning with Asuka, Shinji, and a garden. Take a look. Couldn't hurt.
"Anything can be Evangelion related if you have the will to twist it." -Joseki.
"Anything can be Evangelion related if you have the will to twist it." -Joseki.
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LET THE READING COMMENCE!!!
Welcome back dude.
Welcome back dude.
"You're na�ve, Cecil. Even knowing betrayal and despair, you would depend on the whims of others?" - Golbez
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Sephiroth: "Do you miss the Light?"
Golbez: "Hmph...I merely have duties to fulfill."
Sephiroth: "Too close to the brightness, and you may get scorched."
Golbz:.............
Golbez: Your loss can strengthen you.
"NGE Shinji is broken, Manga Shinji is an asshole, Rebuild Shinji is an idiot. Which is best? Uh, can I get some other options? All of these really suck." -Bagheera
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Sephiroth: "Do you miss the Light?"
Golbez: "Hmph...I merely have duties to fulfill."
Sephiroth: "Too close to the brightness, and you may get scorched."
Golbz:.............
Golbez: Your loss can strengthen you.
"NGE Shinji is broken, Manga Shinji is an asshole, Rebuild Shinji is an idiot. Which is best? Uh, can I get some other options? All of these really suck." -Bagheera
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Okay, I just finished reading the recent chapter, and MAN is it visceral, especially from Asuka's perspective.
I could actually FEEL the frustration and exhaustion she felt towards her situation, especially with her on "temp leave" from her job. You'd think she'd make an effort to actually try to blend with the world, but considering how the world has both treated both her and Shinji before and AFTER 3I, it's understandable how'd she be defensive about everyone.
That being said, both kids are still kind of on a path of self-destruction, with Asuka being more hostile, and Shinji being more withdrawn then ever. (Except when it came to his Father. I was kind of proud of him for taking the stance on deciding to walk away from his father.) That being said though, that kind of thing may look good on paper, but it's not going to give him any closure, especially with the demand of the world on them. They're gonna have to face their demons soon.
And Folk Devil, THANK you for the ending tease, it's about time that she RETURNED. Although, this is pretty much an "anything goes" kind of scenerio, because we have no idea what the UN has in store for all of them, or how they're going to react to each other. Are they going to embrace each other, or going to push each other further away because the pain of failure to them is too deep? Time will tell, and excellent work dude.
I could actually FEEL the frustration and exhaustion she felt towards her situation, especially with her on "temp leave" from her job. You'd think she'd make an effort to actually try to blend with the world, but considering how the world has both treated both her and Shinji before and AFTER 3I, it's understandable how'd she be defensive about everyone.
That being said, both kids are still kind of on a path of self-destruction, with Asuka being more hostile, and Shinji being more withdrawn then ever. (Except when it came to his Father. I was kind of proud of him for taking the stance on deciding to walk away from his father.) That being said though, that kind of thing may look good on paper, but it's not going to give him any closure, especially with the demand of the world on them. They're gonna have to face their demons soon.
And Folk Devil, THANK you for the ending tease, it's about time that she RETURNED. Although, this is pretty much an "anything goes" kind of scenerio, because we have no idea what the UN has in store for all of them, or how they're going to react to each other. Are they going to embrace each other, or going to push each other further away because the pain of failure to them is too deep? Time will tell, and excellent work dude.
"You're na�ve, Cecil. Even knowing betrayal and despair, you would depend on the whims of others?" - Golbez
---------------------------------------
Sephiroth: "Do you miss the Light?"
Golbez: "Hmph...I merely have duties to fulfill."
Sephiroth: "Too close to the brightness, and you may get scorched."
Golbz:.............
Golbez: Your loss can strengthen you.
"NGE Shinji is broken, Manga Shinji is an asshole, Rebuild Shinji is an idiot. Which is best? Uh, can I get some other options? All of these really suck." -Bagheera
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Sephiroth: "Do you miss the Light?"
Golbez: "Hmph...I merely have duties to fulfill."
Sephiroth: "Too close to the brightness, and you may get scorched."
Golbz:.............
Golbez: Your loss can strengthen you.
"NGE Shinji is broken, Manga Shinji is an asshole, Rebuild Shinji is an idiot. Which is best? Uh, can I get some other options? All of these really suck." -Bagheera
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Welcome back Folk great chapter you made but I was wondering if you could make the next chapter from HER point of view as that something that's needs to happen.
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There is a God!
Thank you for updating Folk, it had been so long I'd pretty much given up hope for another chapter.
Now that Misato is back. . . I can imagine Shinji fearing meeting her again, dreading that she'll blame him for the impact, or being shot, or for not being strong enough to save her.
And then of course there is the whole "Adult Kiss" thing, which I doubt is going to go over well with the Judge and Jury if Shinji testifies. That kind of relationship is frowned upon even in Japan itself.
The CIA Spooks are probably going to use her as Leverage to make Shinji testify. Well he won't want to testify, if it means keeping Misato away from a awkward visit from Chris Hansen he'll probably do it. Because for all his flaws And issues with her and the years he spent trying to cope with all her contradictions and his love/resentment towards her. He still cares.
Thank you for updating Folk, it had been so long I'd pretty much given up hope for another chapter.
Now that Misato is back. . . I can imagine Shinji fearing meeting her again, dreading that she'll blame him for the impact, or being shot, or for not being strong enough to save her.
And then of course there is the whole "Adult Kiss" thing, which I doubt is going to go over well with the Judge and Jury if Shinji testifies. That kind of relationship is frowned upon even in Japan itself.
The CIA Spooks are probably going to use her as Leverage to make Shinji testify. Well he won't want to testify, if it means keeping Misato away from a awkward visit from Chris Hansen he'll probably do it. Because for all his flaws And issues with her and the years he spent trying to cope with all her contradictions and his love/resentment towards her. He still cares.
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Man, is this fic underrated.
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Right? Even though it's not finished, it's THE best post-Third Impact story out there, at least in my view. I'm sure it'll gain more traction over time.
Amarantos - an NGE AU, beginning with Asuka, Shinji, and a garden. Take a look. Couldn't hurt.
"Anything can be Evangelion related if you have the will to twist it." -Joseki.
"Anything can be Evangelion related if you have the will to twist it." -Joseki.
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Someone should put it on TV tropes, that might help it get more traction
Anywhere can be paradise as long as you have the will to live. After all, you are alive, so you will always have the chance to be happy.
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I've read three chapters so far.
This is legitimately great writing. The first chapter was overly expositional, but both chapter 2 and 3 are something I'd expect from official published fiction.
Nice job.
This is legitimately great writing. The first chapter was overly expositional, but both chapter 2 and 3 are something I'd expect from official published fiction.
Nice job.
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Re: The Creative Principle
Amarantos - an NGE AU, beginning with Asuka, Shinji, and a garden. Take a look. Couldn't hurt.
"Anything can be Evangelion related if you have the will to twist it." -Joseki.
"Anything can be Evangelion related if you have the will to twist it." -Joseki.
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HOLY HELL I WAS JUST SHARING THIS ON THE DISCORD SERVER AND SAW IT WAS UPDATED THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU
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