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I'm Gonna Translate Things

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Postby Valikdu » Sun Aug 07, 2016 5:10 am

Um, hi.

I've decided to try translating some stories into English. I've chosen this short story for my first try.

I'm looking for feedback on the quality of the translation.
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Postby pwhodges » Sun Aug 07, 2016 12:58 pm

While reading it (not critically, for the story), no issues with the language struck me - and they often do, even with those writing original stories in their native language. So I'd say it's absolutely fine.

I liked the story, too, so I'm pleased to have been enabled to read it. Thanks!

(BTW, I know nothing of Mass Effect, but the story worked for me anyway.)
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