The Defilement of Asuka Langley Soryu [Discussion]

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Postby Gob Hobblin » Thu Sep 26, 2013 5:58 pm

Um...... :bigeyes:

......no. No no....nope.
Though, Gob still might look good in a cocktail dress.
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Postby ElMariachi » Fri Sep 27, 2013 2:37 am

Let me guess, Asuka got... creative with her extra sets of arms, and poor Shinji is the one who served as guinea pig for the fiery octopus German imagination... :bigeyes:
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Postby Gob Hobblin » Fri Sep 27, 2013 9:00 am

.......for the love of God please don't make me answer this question.........
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For the record, the chapter itself isn't bad. It needed a lot of work, but it was a good rough draft. I gave my edits and 2-cents worth, and I'll leave it to the rest of you to judge it when the author posts.

The omake is....nothing to do with the story itself.
Though, Gob still might look good in a cocktail dress.
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Postby ElMariachi » Fri Sep 27, 2013 3:00 pm

Soooo... the new chapter was uploaded...

Shinji is very bold, much more than I can honestly give him credit for without shattering my Suspension of Disbelief.

Now the omake... errrrr... :psyduck:



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Postby Gob Hobblin » Fri Sep 27, 2013 3:08 pm

I felt that way, too, but it's his fanfic, so if he wants to characterize Shinji this way, bene to him. My biggest concern is that he lays the ground for it...if this is how Shinji behaves, has he always been this way? Is this 'our' Shinji, or Shinji in this world?

I warned you about the omake, but you didn't believe me!! Why didn't you believe me?!?!

Your little gif sums it up nicely, though.
Though, Gob still might look good in a cocktail dress.
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Postby Guy Nacks » Fri Sep 27, 2013 4:17 pm

Wat.
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Postby Squigsquasher » Fri Sep 27, 2013 4:26 pm

Well, I have lost interest in the fic, so I read the Omake...

Umm...

No. Just no.
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Postby PanzerEVA » Fri Sep 27, 2013 4:35 pm

Oh. My. God. That. Omake....................



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Postby Guy Nacks » Fri Sep 27, 2013 4:52 pm

I mean it's not THAT bad...still a little distressing.


If you want eye-gougingly bad, go read Shinji's Nightmare Cataclysm

....hoo BOY. Probably the worst eva fanfic in existence.
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Postby NemZ » Fri Sep 27, 2013 5:17 pm

NOPE
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Postby Stillborn » Fri Sep 27, 2013 6:05 pm

Eye-gougingly bad was already done long ago in the form of Hellstorm Evangelion... If anyone tought before that Kaworu is coming to hard on Shinji and Asuka can't die in less diginified manner than eaten alive...

And I think I've seen the Nightmare before... This Big-Mac sounds familiar... :chinscratch:
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Postby Chuckman » Fri Sep 27, 2013 6:51 pm

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Postby Bagheera » Fri Sep 27, 2013 7:25 pm

Yeeeeah. Plenty of other fics out there.
For my post-3I fic, go here.
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Postby Dream » Sat Oct 12, 2013 2:03 pm

I kinda dropped the fic by this point.

Not sure if we're talking about the same one, but the omake was hilarious for me.
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Postby PanzerEVA » Thu Nov 28, 2013 11:45 am

Long time no speak on this one.


I have a message from the author, though he didn't address it to anyone in particular.


Fanatic (formerly futafanatic) will not be writing anymore stories for this account. He is moving over to AFFN and will work there.


Basically, the guy who wrote that 'questionable' omake will no longer be inputting that sort of stuff. He will have moved over to Adult Fanfiction by this time.

Also:
I also have created a schedule. I hope to update weekly. At the downside of it being just one story. If you are lucky, two.

It goes as such:

Sisterly Bonds

DALS (Defilement of Asuka Langley Soryu)

The Transom

Mind Break (provisional)

Wunder
Sisterly Bonds is the guys Girls und Panzer fic. Since there still has been no update to that, I can only assume we won't see another chapter to the subject fiction for a while.

Whether or not you choose to see that as a good thing or not is up to you.
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