Can any of the Japanese-enabled people here translate these for me? It's for the commentary. I don't need the entire page, just one cut from each of these:

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Cut 22 from this one:
[wkimg width=300:39h3twqd]File:06econte 022.JPG[/wkimg:39h3twqd]

Cut 31:
[wkimg width=300:39h3twqd]File:06econte 031.JPG [/wkimg:39h3twqd]

Cut 51:
[wkimg width=300:39h3twqd]File:06econte 051.JPG[/wkimg:39h3twqd]

Cut 126:
[wkimg width=300:39h3twqd]File:06econte 126.JPG[/wkimg:39h3twqd]

Cut 160:
[wkimg width=300:39h3twqd]File:06econte 160.JPG[/wkimg:39h3twqd]

Cut 195:
[wkimg width=300:39h3twqd]File:06econte 195.JPG[/wkimg:39h3twqd]

Thank you for any help you can give me.

I had Hiromi take a quick look at these since she's here.

Cut 22: Shinji lost consciousness, surrounded by bubbles

Cut 31: (SE) beeeeeeeep, monitor

Cut 51: (SE) beep beep, electrocardiogram monitor, zoom up(?)(maybe zoom in?)

Cut 126: (SE) beep beep beep beep, Shinji inside capsule

Cut 160: ?

Cut 195: fade out - phone booth in front of the buildings, background skyscrapers are lit up
something about a photo reference(?) (not sure what the books are referring to, it's a reference to something that's not in the storyboards).

There's some jargon in there she doesn't understand and she couldn't make out what 160 says at all. Her English isn't that great so this isn't going to be 100% accurate.

I don't know kana. If it was romaji, I might be able to make out some of it.

@Ornette

Thank Hiromi for me, most of that seems to be usable.

Anyone else here want to tackle #160?

C-160 is saying to use C-9 from episode 02, with some specs on effects to apply. #02/C-009's description Sign close-up: "Danger, No Entry Zone" should suffice.

The one with Cut 22 includes part of Cut 19...and Ramiel's beam comes out of the building even in the econte. Odd!

We're in desperate need of translators for the Episode 07 script (and the episodes overall).

I've done this little http://wiki.evageeks.org/FGC:Episode_07_Translation , but if anybody else wants to contribute, you know what to do.

Sailor Star Dust wrote:We're in desperate need of translators for the Episode 07 script (and the episodes overall).

I've done this little http://wiki.evageeks.org/FGC:Episode_07_Translation , but if anybody else wants to contribute, you know what to do.

The script seems to be already done in english, do you want the notes to be translated?
Or is the script on there taken from the english dub?

InstrumentalityOne wrote:The script seems to be already done in english

Huh? What script? That link you see to Episode 07 is being translated (so far by me only) from the official Gainax scripts, so the ADV dub/Platinum's translation have nothing to do with it. If you scroll down more you'll only see (as of this writing, I should be able to knock out more tomorrow) half of Episode 07 Scene 01 is translated.

Sailor Star Dust wrote:Huh? What script? That link you see to Episode 07 is being translated (so far by me only) from the official Gainax scripts, so the ADV dub/Platinum's translation have nothing to do with it. If you scroll down more you'll only see (as of this writing, I should be able to knock out more tomorrow) half of Episode 07 Scene 01 is translated.

http://wiki.evageeks.org/FGC:Episode_07_Cut_338

No translation here:
http://wiki.evageeks.org/FGC:Episode_07_Translation

But it's there for some reason.

InstrumentalityOne wrote:But it's there for some reason.

That's just a transcription of the Platinum Edition subs. It only covers the dialogue, so we're using it as a placeholder until we're able to get a proper translation which includes the scene descriptions.

Just as a note, I created pages for the http://wiki.evageeks.org/Evangelion_1.11_Script_(Translation) and http://wiki.evageeks.org/Evangelion_2.22_Script_(Translation) scripts. I know first thing's first with translating Episode 07 for the FGC, but it would be great if we could get more help on that front.

Sailor Star Dust wrote:We're in desperate need of translators for the Episode 07 script (and the episodes overall).

I've done this little http://wiki.evageeks.org/FGC:Episode_07_Translation , but if anybody else wants to contribute, you know what to do.

I suppose that I could invest some time to help here and there.