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Postby tehprognoob » Mon Jul 18, 2011 10:55 pm

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Imperial Calendar, year 2010; a mere decade after Second Impact, the Holy Britannian Empire had risen out of its ashes and had once again embarked upon its mission of Pax Britannia. Its first victim was the tiny island nation of Japan, devastated by the Impact but climbing furiously in power through its vast sakuradite trade. It, however, was no match for the titanic Empire. The Japanese military was devastated by the introduction of the first Humanoid Autonomous Armored Knight, the Knightmare frame. Light, fast and deadly, the Knightmare frames devastated the Japanese line of defense for the mainland, and Japan fell to its knees. Prime Minister Kururugi committed suicide and the once-proud nation became known simply as "Area 11."


Shinji Ikari is fourteen, out of school, and selling ice cream on the streets on the Tokyo Settlement. His mother was dead, his father gone off to work in some clandestine lab, and he lives with his old but still fierce and nationalistic aunt in a small tent in the rubble of the Shinjuku Ghetto. Despite her militancy, the boy is soft, sensitive and somewhat shy, covering up any emotion with admirable rapidity. As the rising power of Zero overtook the ghettos, hope began to surface again for the Japanese people, until a devastatingly powerful monster, known only as an "Angel," appears on the scene. His father reappearing, Shinji found himself at the center of a political and military maelstrom, caught between the Angels, his father's shady organization, Nerv, the Holy Britannian Empire, the Black Knights, and his personal loyalties.


Stage I: Shinji Ikari
Stage II: Angel Attack
Stage III: I'll Pilot It!
Stage IV: Britannia
Stage V: Mustn't Run Away
Stage VI: Let Britannia Deal With It!
Stage VII: A Reason to Fight
Stage VIII: Lamprouge
Stage IX: Langley
Stage X: Asuka Strikes!
Stage XI: The End of a Dream is Reality
Stage XII: False Miracles
Stage XIII: Now, Let's Dance!
Stage XIV: Friends
Stage XV: The Machine
Stage XVI: Rebirth
Stage XVII: After
Stage XVIII: In the Shadow of Memory
Stage XVIV: Webs
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Postby tehprognoob » Sat Aug 20, 2011 9:15 pm

BUMP

Stage IX: Langley

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Postby NemZ » Sun Aug 21, 2011 4:27 am

I don't really have time to read it now but I'll give it a shot later.
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Postby Final Messenger » Mon Aug 22, 2011 9:32 am

I just read your fic and I enjoyed it. Overall it was pretty good job. The only problem I had with it really is Asuka seemed a little out of character ( or maybe it's just me). I'm really interested in where the story will go. Also being a shameless A/S shipper I am hoping for a A/S ending. It's a good cross-over story can't wait for the next entry.
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Postby tehprognoob » Mon Aug 22, 2011 9:37 am

I will try to take Asuka back in-character, but remember,
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she's trying to lure Shinji in,
or "cultivating" him to her own advantage, and this Asuka is in a massively different situation.

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Postby Final Messenger » Tue Aug 23, 2011 9:04 am

oh I forgot to mention this in my earlier post I really enjoyed how you
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combined the knightmare tech and the eva tech. Finally a production model unit that is noticeably different from the test type ( well if there were any differences in the series I did not notice it)
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Postby NemZ » Thu Aug 25, 2011 2:20 pm

So I read the first 2 chapters but I think I'm done with it. It's an interesting fusion I haven't seen before but the handling of it, especially in terms of pacing and time skips, is very off-putting.
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Postby tehprognoob » Thu Aug 25, 2011 3:12 pm

Time skips are only in the first few chapters. Then it derails from both story lines. The first two chapters were basically to hurriedly slap in as many characters as possible. Then I tried to make the story roughly conform to the NGE timeline. Give the later chapters another quick shot when you have nothing to do, man.

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Postby Final Messenger » Wed Sep 07, 2011 5:47 pm

I read your most recent chapter on fanfiction .net. It was a good chapter and talk about a cliffhanger ending. Keep up the great work.
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Postby tehprognoob » Thu Dec 29, 2011 10:04 pm

Stage XVII: After

Is this enough to get you guys commenting?

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Postby Deepak » Thu Dec 29, 2011 10:07 pm

I'll read it tomorrow

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Postby Deepak » Mon Jan 02, 2012 1:55 pm

View Original PostDeepak wrote:I'll read it tomorrow

CLIFFHANGER! I like it so far.

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Postby Deepak » Tue May 08, 2012 6:44 pm

oh wow this is getting better


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