NGE: SE - Going to try to start writing again...hopefully
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Damn straight Hexon.Arg! Now, none of you have reasons not post feedback!
"Everyone but me has gone fucking nuts. I'm the eye of the goddam storm." - Tycho, Penny Arcade (Or a very irrate Fuyutsuki)
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Feedback.
Rereading the story, I have to say it holds up well. (anything looks well written at 1:57 in the morning, so I got back here early)
I'm pretty horrible at feedback since I'm not very picky about how something was written.
I just care about what was written. I do like what I see.
I'm pretty horrible at feedback since I'm not very picky about how something was written.
I just care about what was written. I do like what I see.
I asked "And where would you take me?"
At this the beast laughed, tears made of my mother's blood leaked from his eyes.
"I will take you to every place you never wanted to be, and you will hate it."
"Then I will take you to every place you've already been, and you will hate that also."
"Last I will take you to the places you have always dreamed of, and that you'll hate worst of all."
At this the beast laughed, tears made of my mother's blood leaked from his eyes.
"I will take you to every place you never wanted to be, and you will hate it."
"Then I will take you to every place you've already been, and you will hate that also."
"Last I will take you to the places you have always dreamed of, and that you'll hate worst of all."
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~Leons Rateing is in. Dont be mad at any rateings!
~The Good ^;^
*>* Fun to read
*<* Easy to get into
*/* BIG words
~The Bad
>o^ NAMES SUCK ( what the hell is Samul Frost sounds like a cult leader)
^o< SPRB (Some Parts Repetios and Boring)
~_~ Long ( need shorter chapters or a few breaks or somthing)
~THE UGLY O.O
@o@ NO ORANGINALALTY
~Score out of 10 : 5
~Bonus : 1 (how much time and effort put in)
~EXTRA!!(rarly given) : 2 (true Evangelion fan )
~Total : 8 (Almost perfect BUT ITS NOT!)
~The Good ^;^
*>* Fun to read
*<* Easy to get into
*/* BIG words
~The Bad
>o^ NAMES SUCK ( what the hell is Samul Frost sounds like a cult leader)
^o< SPRB (Some Parts Repetios and Boring)
~_~ Long ( need shorter chapters or a few breaks or somthing)
~THE UGLY O.O
@o@ NO ORANGINALALTY
~Score out of 10 : 5
~Bonus : 1 (how much time and effort put in)
~EXTRA!!(rarly given) : 2 (true Evangelion fan )
~Total : 8 (Almost perfect BUT ITS NOT!)
Don't ban me for a limited time! Either ban me for good or let me be. (I only hold grudges for a few years lol)
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- Sachiel
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~THE UGLY O.O
@o@ NO ORANGINALALTY
I suppose it's hard to be original when dealing with a story about the US branch, or anything to do with eva for that matter. I've heard it's been attempted many times.
Anyway...who knows when I'll have time to work on it again...BUT IT WILL BE FINISHED! That's a promise. I hope as the story continues you'll like it a bit more, and everything will make sense.
"Everyone but me has gone fucking nuts. I'm the eye of the goddam storm." - Tycho, Penny Arcade (Or a very irrate Fuyutsuki)
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I know many of you don't care but I'm going to try to start updating the story soon. Hopefully, by next week I'll have added the rest of 2.5 and at least starting to work on chapter 3.
I think I should start updating by chapter pieces inside of complete chapters, that should make it seem like I'm doing more work than I actually am or something...
High school sucks...
I think I should start updating by chapter pieces inside of complete chapters, that should make it seem like I'm doing more work than I actually am or something...
High school sucks...
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Me? I'm a senior so it's especially hard. It's not the work load that's the problem. It's the "no motivation" part that really gets to you. Trust, me for those you who are younger, unless you're extremely focused (in other words, not a normal slacker teenager), it doesn't stop getting harder.
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